lol actually it would have been of advantage if Greg had frozen up... it would have nailed him in front of Sara's door... but no, he took flight. lol

Ohmagawsh! I love this fic bee-yond belief! Greg is so sweet and innocent and..just...*squee!* Anywho, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

~Gema~

That was fast. How’d it go?”

“It failed. I froze up.”

“I knew you would.”

Aw jesus...poor Greggo. So shy and unconfident. Ah, I love him anyway. Great job! Suprisingly, I can't think of where you're going to take this, which is a good thing. Can't wait for an update!

~Gema~

Haha! It's becoming so funny! I like him this way, the way we see his thoughts and etc. Thanks a lot, hope to have a next chapter soon.

Aww, why doesn't he finally talk to her? He could make a plan once he's done that and like knows what she's thinking.

Whaouh!! I liked it, thank you so much!! You can feel his fear (can i call it fear?) while trying to knock at the door...All the same, I was feeling a urge to punch him and tell him: "hey, guy!! Wake up!! She's not going to bite you!" That was a great chapter, keep going!! Thanks again.

Poor Greg! Just missing her by seconds and going the wrong way to boot! Great writing as usual, more please! :-)

Good chap.

Shoot!! That was such a chase and that didn't give any (visible) results... That chapter was awesomely taking!! I really enjoyed it!! thanks so much for this story, looking forward for next chap!!

Heh, that was such a cool chase scene. Poor Greg, I kept thinking that he was going to catch up with her... but he didn't.

Oh, and, the moustache-man moment? Loved it. It made me laugh so much.

this is really good, i love it! very suspenseful

Oh, goodness! The brunette is Sara, right? I'm bet you anything that it's Sara! That was a really good twist. Great story so far- I loved the paragraph where he thoughts abou the contrasts between Las Vegas and San Fransisco- that was really clever! Good job! Can't wait for a new update!

~Gema~

OOH!! Who's this brunette?? That's so weird taht he's still afraid of answering the phone... Well, hope he'll find her... thanks for this new chapter.

Good chapter.

Hey, read this last night but didn't get a chance to review.
But I'm doing so now.
So anyway, I really liked 'I am the Better Man' and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story from here. The summary has me very intrigued indeed. Great opening chapter as well.