Wow. Awesome story! Seriously, it's addictive. I barely managed to peel myself away from the computer to get food. And it's oddly eerie, which was done very well. You may, though, want to go through the last chapter and see why it's put boxs in place of all the apostrophies and quotation marks. FFN does that from time to time and it's kind of distracting. I'll be really interested to see where this goes!

GASP! What next?? What's going on? I'm so confused!
Awesome story, by the way. Love it!
Incredible plot line, how do you think of these things?
Bad Near, doing those things! I hope they killed him.
And on that note, I will leave you alone.

Fantastic plot! I'm very impressed with the level of thought you put into this story. ^.^

Wow, Near is so creepy. No seriously, he scares the crap out of me. ugh. Argh. this is a very interesting story! i really want to know where youre going with this. its so cool! and so well though out. Please update soon!

i just found your post to death_note on LJ, but i was disappointed that the past chapters were not linked to. so i did a search, and i'm quite happy to find this. ^_^ i've enjoyed it so far. it's very intriguing and i'm curious to see how things develop.

Okay, nothing has happened that I've thought of so far. However I still have many theories. By the way, the apostrophes and quotation marks are messed up. I dunno if that's just my computer or the site or what, just thought I'd let you know.

Very good. Near disturbs me. Hurrah for Mello! Now I have theories for the doc, too.

Hope I didn't offend anyone with the furry ninja Jesus thing.
~SlightlyBroken~

Oh my furry ninja Jesus!

Please continue this soon. It's so good, and I've so many ideas on how it could go. It's killing me. 'Cause I want to know if- and- but then- and- stuff. I know that last sentence makes no sense, but I don't want to put my ideas in a review because of some random sense of almost-paranoia. Seriously, I'm flipping out over here because I have ideas, but I don't think any of them are right, but they're really interesting, and I'm rambling now, so I just stop.

Wow, that was a really long run-on sentence...
~SlightlyBroken~

woah woah, its like some crazy sci fi thriller or something o.o to be honest i had nfi about what was happening first and second chapter, but now i sort of understand but its very creepy and needs more melloxmatt, and near should go die somewhere or something causing them all to regain their memories WRITE MORE SOON

HUH?? the suspense is killing me! O.O! want to know more of this freaky place! still, an incredibly cool story and the detailed language and how you fit it all together... (yes, I have reviewed before, but that was on live journal... its easier keeping track of it this way!) I wish I had had this idea... XD *jealous* XD

Wow this just keeps on getting better and better. Poor kids can't remember anything.
I can't wait for more!

O poor Matsuda. i'm glad Ryuk wasn't trying to be mean, though. Did Ryuk forget because of Near of becasue of a sickness or something that he has?

I never thought I'd read a blatent AU (by blatent I mean completely nothing to do with the original plot as opposed to subtle AUs that just tweak who died or ignore certain parts, no offense meant to your story) with such great writing and obvious effort put into making a decent story that doesnt just revolve around "OMFG MANSMEX!" (not thatI have any issue with PWPs) the style is both unobtrusive and professional, the plot is intricate enough to leave the reader guessing as opposed to simply waiting for preconceivd cliches to unfold, and Near...kinda scares me...in a good way. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Very nice very nice, love-hate relationships are always my faves.
Great work on this I love all the datils you add to these characters to make them your own. ^.^

is that all?? well, i hope it's TBC, cause i feel so empty right now. i wanna know what happens later. cause i expected a horror fic, like, with matt and mello going into a house, and all this horror ** to happen. XD well, maybe that's just me. but yeah, lol i love this though anyway. please continue!!

hm...so I'm guessing that Near erased Matt's memories. But why now after an apparently long time of doing the same thing?