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| SarahLisaWalkerfan101 2008-06-04 ch 16,  | abuseArgh! You couldn't have made this easy, huh? Well, except for the fact that the story isn't settled you did a really great job. Okay, you also did a nice job with the cliffhangar, but I don't like cliffhangars. I like stories that are resolved. Great writing. |
| tshdow 2008-05-27 ch 16, | abuseI really like this story. I hope you come out with the sequel soon. |
| nattylovesjordy 2008-05-21 ch 16, | abuseOkay, so, I had already known there was going to be a sequel, but to leave it like that?! I'm pretty sure you know the next few words coming out of my mouth so I tell you this instead: I hope the update comes soon and that Ellie doesn't kill Sarah and like.. Chuck or something sets Ellie straight. I want Sarah and Chuck to be allowed to like... love each other. |
| NorCali 2008-05-21 ch 16, | abuseThe end? The end! You're really going to leave us hanging like this? Stop messing around with us and post the next story! Please? |
| Airam4u 2008-05-21 ch 16, | abuse'The End'... What!?!?!? I imagine there will be a sequel that I'll have to keep my eye out for. This was a great story! |
| BillAtWork 2008-05-21 ch 16, | abuseWow. I didn't see that coming. I hope this isn't really the end of the story. |
| brickroad16 2008-05-21 ch 16, | abuseHmm . . . do I really need to tell you how brilliant this chapter was? No, but I will anyways! :) Seriously, you've got it all - the perfect combo of action and angst. Can't wait for the sequel! |
| LeeCan 2008-05-21 ch 16, | abuseI love it. Can't wait for more. |
| Moe32 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseI was so excited to see this update! Another great chapter. You have an amazing ability to make the reader panic--the Ellie scenes were giving me a heart attack! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| nattylovesjordy 2008-05-18 ch 15, | abuseWow... Just wow! (and a very very very good wow!) Outstanding? That doesn't quite cover it... 'She cried for the unfairness of it all.' Oh my gosh I would've KILLED to have come up with that line. I'm totally jealous! And then... 'Ellie grimaced. Her brother’s supposed girlfriend was another matter all together.' Uh-oh spaghetti os! |
| Iluvmybb 2008-05-18 ch 15, | abuseWow...another action packed chapter.Loved it. I caught myself saying "Run run run" when I was reading Ellie's parts.lol |
| BillAtWork 2008-05-18 ch 15, | abuseNice update. Very intense but I'm loving it. |
| LeeCan 2008-05-18 ch 15, | abuseGCG, Another great chapter. You do action very well. |
| RedNex 2008-05-18 ch 15, | abuse*LE GASP!* AWESOME! gREAT JOB! |
| BillAtWork 2008-04-25 ch 14, | abuseI thought this couldn't get any more intense but I was wrong. Now Sarah has to add saving Ellie and Bryce to her todo list. She's really on a roll. Get in her way and get one between the eyes. Can't wait to see what happens. |