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| OSuzanne 2008-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful story. One of the best Iroh/Ursa stories I've read. I loved how you described why she loved Iroh. "Ursa loved Iroh because he was worthy of love, and he was worthy of it because he was not a man who could in good conscience court the woman his brother desired." It fits so perfectly with how I see Iroh and how I imagine Ursa could be. |
| RedBrunja 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseOh... nice. I love Ursa being subtle yet opinionated, and the bit about Iroh and her was... really nice. |
| Fenikkusuken 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseNice characterization of this mystery lady; I dearly hope that we do get to see Ursa in Iroh's (and Zuko's, of course) company at some point in this season! |
| HitsuIchi 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was really nice. I'd never really thought about Ursa because I hardly ever seen her in the show, but now she's my favorite! :D |
| Valen123456 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI also notice Piandao ... nice idea You are truely amazing with this character and you hit so many possible truths and ways of thinking ... im sorry but im going to be a little disappointed when Ursa reappears in the series (if the second half of the season ever airs) because you have built her up so high that the creators cant hope to match your wonderful interpretation Something i have noticed is that often the best fanfiction is about background characters that have huge plot importance but have little known about them ... like the Fourth Hokage in Naruto fiction ... ill keep my eye open for your future works |
| ~Escaped~ 2008-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo, so sweet. Thank you. |