|Reviews for In The Eye of the Beholder: Unaware|
| Shadowless.Whispers 4/29/09 . chapter 21
PLEASE update this soon! *gets down on knees* PLEASE!
| 1983Sarah 3/24/09 . chapter 22
ACK! You can't leave it like that! I read this thanks to your drabble and you seriously are insane! Update soon! Now, if possible...lol. Great story, very cool. Not normally an AU fan but this one rocks my socks!
| NongPradu 2/16/09 . chapter 22
Uh-oh... Have you given up on this? No intentions of finishing it?
I'm in love with it - pretty much read the whole thing in one go (with a break for sleep in between).
I think I need you to finish it. Um... yeah. So if you could just get me another chapter by say... end of the week? Umm, yeah, that'd be great. (Sad attempt at a Lumberg impersonation)
| NongPradu 2/16/09 . chapter 8
I'm really enjoying this story. It's so interesting and intriguing - and this particular chapter is inspired for so many reasons.
I was giggling like a loon at the names of your civilian witnesses! lol. I especially love the Eric and Sammy Brady bit - plus Lana Lang and Clark Kent! ahahahahahaha.
You know, for years, whenever I saw Jensen Ackles in something I'd remark, "Hey, it's Eric Brady!"
And the reports style of this chapter is just a stroke of genius. LOVE IT!
| Shadowless.Whispers 12/1/08 . chapter 22
oh please update this story soon, im dying to find out what happens ]
| Athena dancing 10/19/08 . chapter 22
You mentioned Castiel and Uriel! That's just...swell. I really like this story. I don't know why this delights me so much, but the icy blue wings speckled with robin egg blue makes me grin like the Cheshire cat. It also gives me a mental image of those egg shaped malt balls they sell at Easter. The flashbacks to pre-Sam in the womb were great, and I really like the way you brought Ellen into the story. It was unexpected and sort of heartbreaking. Thanks for sharing!
| mysong 10/18/08 . chapter 22
Well, if there wasn't already some winged un's in the series, I would say that yours would definitely be on the top of the list to get TOTALLY written in there! *waves to Castiel* *hug-tackles Dark, Adin, Dean* "It's a beautiful sight." (Not in the same context as ol' Azazel) XD
| PADavis 10/14/08 . chapter 22
Now,this, this is fantastic. And you say you don't hurt Dean. Hah. You hurt Dean, Adin who is ... Dean, and Dark who is, well again ... Dean, and then you go back and smack them all again. Sam remembering being a little nephilim, icky. But good, in an icky way. And I LMAO when I realized you were moving this to St Louis.
| Maz101 10/14/08 . chapter 22
So the battle goes on!
Particularly loved that whole passage of when "The earth tunes up for the show...she screams like a banshee" ...with all the catastrophes detailed. A nice 9though terrible) mix I thought.
Loved "Dean shines so brightly he eclipses that fake sun in this place. Storm clouds swirl and boil in the turbulent air all around him. His wings are outstretched, shining glowing blades of blue flame and golden light." ...kinda says it all for a Deangirl.
And Yay! for Dark!
LOL at the "Location, location, location" line.
As far as I'm concerned the battle can keep on keeping on - you have new ideas for each twist and each one still has suspense.
Still all great.
| Irishmama 10/12/08 . chapter 22
I'm sorry I'm tired of reading about Dean fighting back time and timr again only to loose and die or almost die at the hands of Azazel over and over again finishing with the demond accually fallen angel's joyous laughture. It's just to depressing and well after all this time it's kind of boring too.
| Nyx Wings 10/12/08 . chapter 22
O! I LOVE how you've added Castiel and Uriel here, that's AWESOME! And whatever Dark's doing, it's gonna be spectacular. I also like the bit describing all the crazy stuff happening around the world, like right out of a horror movie. Well, it *is* the apocalypse.
Oh wow, and Sam finally remembers! All these climactic scenes, just coming together! Dark blew up some of South Dakota, and Dean...he's got something planned, but dang, it sure looks bad. Man, how is it all gonna end?
| babyreaper 10/12/08 . chapter 22
Brilliant chapter. I hope you haven't killed Dean off? not after everything he's been through, can't wait for the next update, make it soon.
| SciFiRN 10/12/08 . chapter 22
OMG. Seriously, this was wonderful and brilliant and as convoluted as usual, which is exactly everything I read this story for. The way it flows is almost poetic, a bit psychedelic and trippy. I love it.
Again, the characters are so intriguing and confusing and perfect that I don't know which one I love/hate or otherwise the most. The scenes pop off the 'page' so vivid and strange. WOW!
Okay, as a side note. Having shopped at a Wal-Mart superstore in Dayton, OH. I can totally understand why a shopper might become violent and dismembered store employees ) I sympathize.
| courtXjester 10/2/08 . chapter 21
Beautiful and stunning as always. What more can I say? You're imagery is stupendous and I look to you as an example. I cannot wait till chapter 22. :D
| Nyx Wings 9/22/08 . chapter 21
Eep! OMG Ellen! Man, looks like everyone's gonna end up dead before it's over. And they may or may not come back. E, Dean! FIRE! OMG! And yay, John sent Bobby back! Awesome! Oh wow, this story is just so frickin' awesome!