Beautifully described of what he was feeling. Loved Shadow, he is so alone sometimes..

luv it! LOVE IT! L-O-V-E I-T!
heh, heh, it's so natural! And the best kind of shadamy stories, are the natural ones. It makes the couple real. And , yours is as real as they come. I decided to read Amy's and Shadow's POV before reviewing. BRAVA!
keep it up!

Omg, wow. You should not have been nervous. I loved the emotion. It was like I felt it myself. I always get into what I read! That was super awesome!! I loved it! Great job! Making more?

Ultimate_Lifeform

I just gotta say: WOW! Your artwork and writing is a 5/5 star rating!

Beautiful! I liked this! Your first fic, you say? Well, bravo! Keep up all your amazing work!! latr!

Two words: F*G BRILLIANT!

He he, I see you posted this awesome oneshot here! X3
I really enjoyed reading it again! I hope you'll write more stories because you're a great writer! ^-^
*favs*

Aww, very cute story!
And very well written ;)!
Nice first shot, really.

Oh, my God.

For the first time ever, I'm speechless - this fic was that wonderful! Oh...I haven't read gems like this in a long time...

All the conflicting emotions inside of Shadow were believable for once, but his point of view was what captured me the most. It was so deep, so mature, in my opinion...oh, it was amazing, to say the least. It really makes me wonder if you will create another piece like this one, which I really count on...

Keep on writing!

Aww. This is great stuff! The fact that the ending made me smile in glee makes it only more better than it already is. You should continue making fics like this! And hopefully the pairing would be ShadAmy!

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Firstly, you are an excellent writer! This was amazing.
Fantastic emotion, description, characterisation and interaction between the characters.
Secondly, I loved it. X3
*Faves*

Wow this was awesome for your first fic
Excellent your WAY better than me
This was so adorable *squeals*
Update soon

Wonderful work!! Love the introspection, how it flows from canon events into original ones, and the style (excellent use of formatting for emphasis)! And you say you're not a good writer! As Shadow would put it, hmph! XD You've no reason to be nervous about posting because with your quality work I'm sure you'll be a very welcome author here! Looking forward to seeing more from you!

Wow, this is very powerful and emotional (a little bit of suspense in there.. XD)
Awesome story :D if this is your standard of writing, I can't wait to see more ^-^