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dangerahead
2009-09-28 . chapter 21
This story you've written here, is every kind of wonderful.
I mean... I love it. It is pure brilliance.
You're an amazing writer, you really are.
Please, for the love of god, continue?
It will complete me~.
Lmao, that must sound so cheesy. ;_;
But, really.
This story is freaking amazing, and if you continue, I will give you the best gift of all!
... A childs laughter. :'D
G.W Stevenson
2009-07-30 . chapter 21
Initially I wasn't expecting this fic to have same sex couples but due to skillfull writing,they fit seamlessly. Obviously,the premesis of this story is vastly different to that of the tv show,yet somehow manages to maintain the core essence of the characters.I especially enjoy how you portray kyle.A perfect protaganist that the reader can proudly identify with as he struggles with the tortures of teenage life.
And then there's kenny.What exists purely as a one dimensional character joke in the series has transformed into a three dimensional,heroic and rather beautifull character who just shines through the whole thing.
This is quite possibly the most memorable thing I've read all year (including novels) and I just cant wait to see how it concludes (though hopefully it has a bit more to go before that!)
Alice The Fairy
2009-07-28 . chapter 21
YOU HAVE A REASON TO CONTINUE THIS!
:D
Spasm-istic1
2009-07-27 . chapter 21
Oh my God, you updated. I've been waiting on this story for a while now. This chapter was great. I am in love the plot and how this story has gone and is going. You are an amazing writer and I hope you can update again. Please, update soon or when you can. And don't stop writing, you got a gift dude.
EyBayBay
2009-07-26 . chapter 21
you seriously need to update this. Forget your socail life, just update! You have the charectors so right on that I forget while watching southpark that kyle isn't REALLY gay! The only thing I'm confused on is whether cartman just made out with kyle or actaully raped him, but that's mainly just because I'm a dumb*ss and can't figure it out. I seriously almost cried at numberous points in this, and i NEVER cry!
B-pod
2009-07-26 . chapter 21
Whoa! That was fast! (for me, i mean. considering i just reviewed) When I saw my email alert, I did a double take. Cool, I'm glad you're continuing :D
Argh, I would talk about the chapter, but my dad is biching at me to pack my stuff. Well, I'll just say that I liked it and can't wait for the next ones.
Live2Write4Ever
2009-07-26 . chapter 21
Yay! I'm so excited that you're continuing this story. I really like how the plot's grown, and all the drama/relationships growing and breaking is really interesting to read. I can totally picture this is how the show would be in later years. My favorite character in your story is Kenny because you capture his tragic home life so well, how all the stuff we don't hear on the show is in your story. (Plus I think Kenny on the show is adorable ^_^) I look forward for another update! =]
Dnny By
2009-07-26 . chapter 2
i cried when i read this
JVM-SP150
2009-07-25 . chapter 21
Wow, it's been... a year now?

Still, that is dedication, and it's always good to see another author who's dedicated enough to keep going even after a long break.
B-pod
2009-07-22 . chapter 20
"Discontinued"? NO! No, you can't do that! It's 5am. I couldn't stop reading this, and stayed up until now just for it. It's... so... I don't exactly know the words to describe it, but it's awesomely done. I'd ware myself out trying to list every detail of why I love this. This is too good to discontinue, please!
By the way, I've seen you on deviantart. Cute stuff ;)
Anyway, you rock, I hope you change your mind and start writing this again before I die, and I'll just 'Alert' this anyway so that I can live in high hopes that one day... I'll received an email saying chapter 21 has arrived... Jeez, am I over dramatic or what?
(sorry if I might have already sent you a review. my internet is all screwy)
OCD1
2009-06-19 . chapter 20
You're story is amazing. I read all twenty chapters. It's very realistic, humorous, depressing, suspenseful or cliffhanger-y (whatever word it is, it was that.)This is one of the best stories I have ever read and I can't wait for updates.
passthebutter
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
I just want to comment on this: "I update on popular demand. At least 3 reviews per chapter is all I want before I update the next." Man, aren't you the most pretentious person ever? Seriously? Jesus, lighten up. Writing isn't about reviews or popularity - it's about WRITING. Your story is okay; it's not brilliant, but it's not terrible either. Your characterisation is good but overall I'd call this fic mediocre at best. Seriously though, begging for reviews isn't pretty, and it really lowered my opinion of you. You might've said something redeeming in a later A/N but honestly? I didn't get past Chapter 8. Ha.

Just lighten up, m'kay? ;D
Tea
2009-02-11 . chapter 20
awesome please update
Novacaine-chan
2008-12-21 . chapter 20
More please? I really like this story, and hope that you continue soon.
Keeper of ancient secrets
2008-12-18 . chapter 20
You my friend must be a genius. you got me to read through a kyman scene (which makes my eyes slowly bleed) to reed the rest of your story absolutelly brilliant
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