Aww... I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy right now - it reminded me of those crazy family Sunday dinenrs my family & cousins used to have when I was younger back in Hong Kong. It's a good feeling ^-^ Plus, this is probably one of those rare fics I like that doesn't have a particular pairing of some kind and is just family-oriented.

Your writing style is awesome. I was having trouble picturing this at first - since the Malfoys were basically all Pureblood elitists (I guess Narcissa kinda still is). Heck, it's even harder to imagine Drace and Harry actually having a civil conversation with each other (I guess they did grow out of it - unlike Sirius and Snape [chuckles]) But your writing definitely convinced me.

I love your portrayal of Teddy! And the fact that he's a culinary art student (personally, I just find that men who can cook - very sexy [grins]) It's also very sweet of him to act sort of an in-between link between the Malfoys and Potters.

Basically, what this long comment accounts to is that: it's an excellent fic ^-^

I really liked this story! There was a lot of good character moments, and I always thought there weren't enough fics between Teddy and the Malfoys.

What a sweet portrait! Great job!

So cute and heartwarming. Very adorable!

Aww this was a lovely family fic and I loved the idea of Al being a heartthrob XD! Very nicely done and excellently written.

AWW! I LOVED this! So sweet! Even though it was REALLY long, it was great! I loved Draco and Elizabeth and Andy and Ginny and Albus and Lil& Score's relationship! And Albus was ADORABLE! James sounds JUST like my cousin Chris! LOL, we all have guys like him in our lives, eh? Harry and Ginny's sweet banter was so cute, and Score and Lil were just ADORABLE! I loved all the girl references, Al's especially, but Teddy's were really cute. THe Potters' sound SO much like my family! I loved how excited Scorpius got, too. Great job! I LOVED it!! (And having Lily in Slytherin was a great touch!)

Loved it. You did a perfect job with this.

Oh! I LOVE IT! ♥.♥ I do wish there was more... *puppy eyes*

Well... other than my desire for more... I love it to the umpteenth power, and it is very well written. For some reason, the fact that you made Lily into a Slytherin reached out to me... But that may be my Slytherpride! All in all, great!

♥s from Acey Lupin

awesome! more of these

Cute story! :D Good work! :)

Aw i loved this...score is my new favourite after draco that is :P hehe...stop writing please...everytime i read something new written by u i want to read more and theres never any more :(...

I ADORE this Teddy Universe you've got going here. It makes me so happy to see Potters and Malfoys interacting! You know, I haven't read HP fanfic in like a month or something because I've discovered this WONDERFUL series called Twilight by Stephenie Meyer (if you haven't read those yet, you MUST read them because they are absolutely fantastic!) and it has become a sort of Potter replacement since the series is over now... Well, okay, "replacement" is a bad word, nothing could EVER replace HP in my life, but Twilight is like... a supplement. Something new to read and be obsessed with. It's really amazing. Seriously, if you haven't read it, go read it now. And if you have, then YAY! There's three books out already and the fourth is coming out this year, and in December they're coming out with a movie and Cedric is playing the main guy! Wow, I've gotten a little sidetracked here, haven't I? Like I said, it's a new obsession :) Anyway, Twilight fanfic has taken over my fandom life, so I haven't read HP for a while- until now. I saw you had another story up, and a Teddy one at that, and I just had to read it. And boy oh boy, did I love it!
Draco is awesome, of course. And I adore Score (I rhyme!)- his insight is amazing. I love his thoughts on Narcissa, it makes so much sense. Why don't you have Victoire in here, though? Was that touched on in the first one? I can't remember... I suppose it would complicate the story if he had a girlfriend to interact with, too... but you could just mention her once or twice, she doesn't have to be a full-fledged character. It's just weird for me to see Teddy without her in a post-nineteen-years-later story. If that makes sense :)
I really do love all the parent/child dynamics, too. Harry with James, Draco with Score, even Narcissa with Draco... I think you've really captured their characters.
Well, it's late, I'm tired, and I have to get up in the morning to meet some friends for breakfast, so I suppose I'll say goodnight! See you next time :)
-JoeBob1379
PS: Just a little ego-booster for ya- You are the one and only author I ever write these uber-long, rambling reviews for. That's how much I

Wonderful story. Everything just seems to fit, and the characterizations are great. I'm adding this to my fav stories list.

This one-shot was a pleasant surprise. =)

I think my favorite part was when Draco and Elizabeth warned Score never to marry a Weasley. I can just picture the hilariousness of Draco's reaction in my head. Also, I liked the whole triangle thing you were insinuating b/t Lily, Score and Rose. I just thought that was cute. Imagine, a Potter crushing on a Malfroy who's crushing on a Weasley. Maybe your next one-shot should be about that...when they're older.

All in all, I really liked this story, but I think I'm more partial to A Sketch of Character as far as your post DH fics go.

Still very much interested in anything you'd have to write post DH (and Bend It of course). It's a shame you're tied up with real life responsibilties right now.

Until next time...

PS. I thought this line was just great :

"Albus smiled, a slow curl of his lips that spread across his face like sunlight until his bright green eyes twinkled behind his spectacles"

That was fabulous! I hope you decide to write a good long post-DH fic. I'm sure you can come up with an amazing plot! But first, you MUST finish "Bend it like Weasley"! I can't wait to read more from you!