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rae2009
2009-10-09 . chapter 33
oh meh gosh that's so cutee!! :D i wish there's a sequel...is there a sequel? say yes. ah imma go look, kay? kudos to ya, you rock!
always-kh
2009-08-21 . chapter 12
okay this is like srsly depressing. but good. and yeah it would come to this.
always-kh
2009-08-21 . chapter 11
nice chapter. was not expecting this whole complication with kairi least not like that that was cool.

lolz no beta's perfect.
always-kh
2009-08-21 . chapter 10
lolz for the mental scaring. and the shock thing was good.
sweetLies
2009-08-19 . chapter 33
REALLY GREAT STORY! > < I read the first few chapters before but today I decided to try out this story again. I have no clue why I gave up on it a long time ago. O: Probably because Axel seemed too much of a pervert.. haha. ♥♥ I love how you used their memories together to link to their new memories together. ♥♥
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 8
another good chapter i like the dvlpmnt there liked the thing with riku and the twist wasn't expecting that.
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 7
wait so axel's not dead but like in a coma? cool. nice plot twist there.
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 6
it was cute with perverted parts thrown in. i'm wondering who the abusive bf is...
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 5
lmao. i agree it's hilarious. i wonder when axel will figure she's not his gf.
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
lolz. i like marly's pov as well adds entertainment factor as does axel's.
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 3
once again i like the different pov's lordie i think u captured axel's boredom and regrets pretty well. being a ghost would totally suck.
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 2
nice chapter i really like having it in axel's pov. nice touch. heh so he instantly dislikes nami b/c of how close he thinks the 2 are lol. so is there gonna b namixdemyx on the side?
always-kh
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
nice fic. interesting first chapter. well-written too. like his reaction to them thinking he's with nami. and it explains why he's so protective of her.
itschristinemylove
2009-08-09 . chapter 33
Aah hah, so cuute. =^-^=
Really liked this story. =o
Marluxia and Larxene were freaking hilarious.
sydviciouskk
2009-08-05 . chapter 32
*instead of a rikuxsora, heh.
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