Great! Ha! Loved the last line with Groves. Excellent one shot!

Stumbled across this and read it at lunch today and had to pop back in when I had time tonight to leave a review.

Very fun little story. Well-written and adorable. Shame 'bout the interruption at the end, but of course Groves' line was perfect!

Enjoyed this a lot. I shall have to venture over to Peacock's Plumage at some point!

Cheers
Nytd

That was hilarious! I was so pissed when she was interuppted. You must write a story where they both come to satisfaction!

That was entirely adorable, pie. XD Honestly. Fluff is a wonderful thing, so far as I'm concerned; you have nothing to worry abnout.

One small oopsie: "she blazed path of light kisses" I think we're missing an 'a' there.

My favorite line: “Yes. I mean no. No, don’t stop.” XD Picturing Norrington in that state is lovely. I grinned very much so.

The ending was purely wonderful, as well. I enjoyed your OC and I enjoyed your sense of humor. :) Good job.

Well, I don't see any hint of the dreaded M-S here. I do see some grand humor and a canon character completely like himself. A nice little fluffy piece for Norrington lovers. Wonderful last line, it made the piece, rounding nicely back to the title.

In my humble opinion, you're toeing the fine line between good OC and Mary Sue. However, I must say, Katherine was really well written, and the almost-Mary-Sue-ness only makes it funnier.

The plot is well thought out and such, and the humour is wry. And, like nearly all of your other reviewers, that last line made my day. :)

Cheers,
TheUnknownMarauder

Actually laughed outloud at the part where she tells Groves to hurry up so he can come back and help her. From personal experience, my spouse would have DIED if the other guys he works with would have caught him in that situation. You described James' reaction perfectly, although I can see high color up on his cheekbones! The way you write makes me visualize the characters- true talent.
It's fun how those two play off of eachother. In "When an irresistable force," the scene in the office where James takes control, and this scene shows how much fun they have volleying about who's in charge.
This was a delight. Thank you yet again for your wonderful writing. Whatever challenge you are up for, you certainly deserve to win!

Dear me, Pie,

that was a bit near the knuckle! Still, it was an enjoyable read.

The OC is a lot of fun, and Norrington is in character. Do I detect some wishful thinking there? You have clearly done your research - the etiquette and social mores are well rendered. I really do like this.

Heads up: James made a strangled sound and sent his wife a glare, a glare which unfortunately sent her into peAls of laughter.

Heh! Great fic, Pie. :D

Piemom!
Kinkeh. ;)
This has your sarcastic wit throughout and I was laughing out loud through most of it. Even though I know you think that it's only fluffy romance (and don't look at me like that, I can tell from your comments)it's one of the damn best romantic pieces I've read- lighthearted, funny and witty.

Interesting, Pie.

I think I like it.

Good luck with the challenge!

-Blackie

That was pretty funny. Maybe my husband and I will play that game tonight. I can do slip knots.

Hello!

Oh me. I suppose James would have smacked Groves had you continued a few lines more. Just a few.

This is all very odd, you know. I have a Pirates OC named Katherine. Well, I /had/ a Pirates OC named Katherine. I don't really write about her anymore. As you saw from my challenge fic, it's all about my Harry Potter OC at the moment.

Anywho, huh! This was quite an interesting little fic. I love to see James in this manner. He almost reminds of Mr. Darcy, if you know who I mean. That gives me an idea, too...for when I'm through with my HP obsession.

Good luck in the challenge! If I know anything about fangirls (seeing as I'm one)...I'd almost say you didn't need luck. But good luck!

MJ-Skywalker

OMG! LOL! I love this! Great story!

Beth
There's something about frogs...

Love it! Love it! Love it!

James and Kat are as wonderful as ever. :) This is just so perfect... and the promise of a little Norrington! WOOT! Now I'd like to be a fly on the wall when Kat tells James about that one!

The last line had be laughing out loud. It was just inspired! :) I can see the look on Groves face as he said it.

As always, you manage to get inside the characters' head, and that really makes the story. They seem so real!

Love it!

Very funny.

*snork*

ROTFLMAO Oh, he is never going to live this down.