Sanriko
2008-02-21
ch 1,  | abuseThat was a tickle in my ribs and full of fun, though there were a few spelling mistakes and I'm sure you mean "sew" not "sow". Sow means to plant like "sowing the seeds into the field. Sew means to embroider, stitch, or hem. I just needed to point that out, sorry. But overall, an awesome story with a great sprinkle of humor which wasn't too random. But I still stand by the idea that Hansel and Gretal are two devilish brats who kill a poor grandmother with the love of baking. I mean, how would you feel if you just made your dream house out of candy and gingerbread and the next thing you know, a couple of brats come nibbling at your house? I'd be ticked off. |
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