Great job with the kids.

Keep the good writing and Happy Holidays.

^_^ This reminded me of Sailor Moon Supers Movie where the pipers Kidnapped the Kids . I actually have that movie. Please continue with the story Please Vaporshi. ^_^

WELL LOOK WHO HAS CAUGHT UP WITH HER READING.

Guh poor Mallards and Negaducks. ...though I am immediately feeling much more sorry for whatever sap has both Morrigan and Milly in the same place.

Hope you get your inspiration bug bitin' so I can read the next chapter three months after you upload it again. XD

I applaude you, you caught Negaducks personality perfectly, i laughed throu this entire chapter!

He he, the comparison of the two families and the way they are handling their sorrows is just so well done. :D
I like your story and I'd love to see you continuing it!

I really like your writing style. The tone of the story is quite serious, yet humorous, making the reader smile about the little interspersed jokes here and there.
I also like the detailed descriptions you gave at the beginning of the chapter. Good job so far!

This IS a great chapter. I admit I usually prefer storys and chapters that focus on Darkwing and Morgana, But honestly you have made me rethink Negs always a sign of good writing. When you can get your readers to think about the characters and not get all freaky about it it shows good depth.Smart plot twist showing how Malicia and Morgana are affected as well. Also an excellent take on an older teen Gos who is facing this kind of crisis. Good work and PLEASE do write more I always liked the cautionary fairy tales and the pied piper is a good one. Your friend Irual

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT CHPTER 3 UP BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND IF THE KIDS ARE GOING TO BE OK
THNAKS

Excellent update!

If you can, check my deviant gallery too, please. The link is in my profile page.

Keep the good writing.

update plz! ooh i love it!

Nice story so far. ^_^

I'm currently working on something, but it's not up yet. Tell me if you would like to read it.

when are you goimg to put chapter 2 up because i want to kmow if gosalyn is going to be in the next chapter or if she is going to be in this story

Ah! Oh no! Morrigan come back... Malicia's gunna kill Negaduck if you don't. ^^;

I hope you get more inspiration for this one and it keeps on truckin' because I wanna know what's goin' on! Everything about this was great... apart from that blasted home gym. XD

This is really cool, i can't wait to read the next update!

Did I miss some of the stories that come before. In the last storey I read Mega Duck and Morrgains made up sister who I think was evil at one point were dating. Bit they did not have a child in that storey. I think this storey is interesting with Mega duck being a dad. I will check to see when the rest of this and trials of a hereo is posted.