Aww so well written! I love Soda... Great story!

That was so sweet and I loved it! Please please please please write more. Are you? Could you maybe email me to tell if you are? Becaue that was so sweet and you write really well.

I love this story. It's simple and sweet, and there's something about it that's also a little sad. I guess it's because we know what will eventually happen between them. Actually, scratch that. I'm practically grieving. Haha- either I'm totally sensitive today, or your story is just really effective. I'm pretty sure it's both.

Baby! You posted it after all! I'm so happy. I remember when you first e-mailed this to me, lol. I still love it just as much, if not more for reading it over a second time. Your writing flows so beautifully; everything just fits perfectly into place as if it were meant to be written which, after reading anything written by you, my darling, I wouldn't doubt was. :)

Hmm ... it says complete though you mentioned perhaps continuing with it. Did you decide not to? Or are you just going to leave it open-ended for a while and see what happens? I quite like it as is, but you could do anything you wanted with it and it would still be wonderful.

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Your ego is swelling, isn't it?

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I knew it.

Lol, I love you, dear, and I'm so glad you posted this. Of course I've already told you multiple times what I think, but hell, I'll say it again: it's terrific. I suppose you'll be pleased to know that I've done a bit of writing today, too ... :)

Lots of love and hugs,
Your Cupcake :) x

I really liked this - it was a nice, gentle look at Sandy and Soda's relationship. I liked that you gave her some doubts, that she sometimes felt she wasn't good enough for Soda or that he was too wild for her. It was a nice way to plant the seeds for her choices later on in their relationship.

And I loved this line: "Yeah, forever. Sounds nice, don't it? Got a ring to it." It was a cute play on words.

It's great to see you writing again!

Laura

I love the begining of this story. I think it has some real potential!And i guess everyone seems in character! love it! update really really soon!

I liked this slice of ordinary times among Sodapop, Sandy and Steve. Not a lot of fics explore the likelihood that Steve and Sandy were friends of sorts and had their own conversations. I like this for that reason. :)