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CSImadfan21
2008-06-28
ch 6,
abuseThis is really good please keep going
was spratlurid quimby
2008-06-22
ch 5,
abusegood story
csimouse
2008-06-21
ch 6,
abuseYou are doing good!
jenstog
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abusemore soon?!
was spratlurid quimby
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseThis is great
crowned tiger
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseYAY!! Pesi is back! lol I was so happy for an update. From both your stories, but anyway the only thing was since this chapter was all grouped together it was a bit ** my eyes, but otherwise...Yay the operation went well and poor Sara I can't even imagine her pain...hopefully she doesn't have to go through anymorea and she doesn't have relapse...keep up both stories, sorry I would review the other but i'm being lazy :-P lol keep going!
Print Dust
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseHey hon,

Your text got bunched.

Might need some cleaning up. Remember we have to double space between paragraphs now.
CSIvHP11
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abusegood chap, she gets to go home, yippee! poor Nicky, scared by a wittle bunny wabit, anyway, cant wait form more:)
CPDCSI
2008-06-20
ch 4,
abuseGreat story...I would love to see Brass' reaction. He is a part of Sara's life.
Veronica10
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseI really like your story, and its amazing how accurate the details are, however, you might want to break up the paragraph into some smaller ones so its easier to read.

Great and touching story
CSImadfan21
2008-06-01
ch 5,
abuseplease keep this going its a good story, completely different from what normally gets typed. Totally unique.
Rach5
2008-05-22
ch 5,
abusegreat chapter. CAth was sweet going with them.
Hope you post more soon. Looks like its going to be a long recovery for sara.:O(
sprat
2008-05-22
ch 5,
abuseGREAT STORY
csimouse
2008-05-21
ch 5,
abuseYou are doing good!
CSIvHP11
2008-05-21
ch 5,
abusegood chap, really good, Cath and her coffee, thats funny:)
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