Aw, Xiggy cares!

I haven't even started this, but I spotted this after finishing The Unfamiliar and just went "FML I'm never going to get off this girls page, am I?" so I'm just going to hand over another small chunk of my soul now and get it over with.

Uwaaah...

I'm curious to when (if) the Twilight children come out (ZEMYXNESSSSS!)

I really like how in the prologue you had some lines from TU too :D

Also, aww Sora! I just wanna hug himmmm (although Axel has taken care of that xD) and I love how you write everyone. Especially Larxene lolol 8D

And Demyx I like a lot here too. Punching Axel and then backing off *snicker*

Oh Dem, don't ever change D

Looking forward to whatever you have in store for this, despite the hiatus :D

Hey i really think you should make a story when Axel did the dirty with alot of people because he wants Roxas and the stories before he went to Twilight Town for Roxas :) It's just my recommendation. And sorry if my english isnt good.

Anyway, i totally LOVE The Unfamiliar and Negative Zero, good job 333

Wait wasent the zanarkand Army trying to steal the core of twilight town? How come in the beginng they were helping? And, YAY! More fun for the unfamloar story'

Of course they would be fighting...when did Axel discover he loved him though?

-Momentai-

I'm totally captured by this story..! I hope there's gonna be more of this because, well - what can I say? I'll just be a miserable unknowing poor human in the universe, haha! No but really, there's something to this story (and The Unfamiliar) that feels so real (how do you do it?) and I swear, my brain is as occupied with Axel's life as it is with my own.

Ok, I've never reviewed someone elses work before, so I'm not really sure what to write. I guess this is less of a review but more a sort of encouragement? Basically I love your work and I have read aaallll ur stories. They are all so good! I started of with The Unfamiliar and now you are writing a prequel to it! I love everyhing of negative zero so far. The chapters are kinda long, but it's good because that means I get to read for longer. So anyway keep doing whatever it is you do to come out with such AMAZING stuff, I am so anxious to see what happens next! I know that's kinda dumb seeing as this is a prequel so I know what happens next but stil... Anyways I have gone on for long enough and I never even made any kind of criticism, constructive or otherwise.. I guess I just felt guilty for not reviewing once in all the time i have been reading your stories. *falls to the floor* please forgive me? *gets back up* So bye for now, I will hopefully review again and just so you know if you ever decide to get anything published I would definitely buy it! (but please carry on fanficing even after you are a famous writer. Me and my friends will all cry if you ever stop!) *ok enough now Billy stop babbling* Bye!

Billy

xxx

p.s. I am a girl even though my name is Billy. I have yet to meet a guy that reads fanfiction.

[This was originally sent a little while ago, but upon reading your journal (and receiving your reply to my comment), I've decided to send this again. Hopefully you see it this time around and if not, well, that's sixty seconds of my time (minus the awkward bashing my head on the desk when FF made me log in and this portion of the review was deleted) perfectly well spent, in my opinion. Anyway, digression completed. Onwards?]

Wow, I'm a whole year and a bit behind on getting around to read this story, like the schmuck I am.

I've gotta say, I'm enjoying Axel's whole "coming of age", if you will, probably because it's thoroughly different than Roxas' story (although in The Unfamiliar you didn't begin the story with his own childhood experience).

I won't lie, I'm a tad bummed that you stopped writing after chapter ten and because the obsession Axel has with watching Roxas, as explained in TU, wasn't quite visited. But at the same time I realize I haven't a clue why you stopped writing, nor do I have a say in how you process things.

Anyhow, as always, your work has blown me away. You're definitely one of my favorite fan fiction authors and I look up to you for the quality of your writing. And once I get off my lazy ass and actually begin to write fics. of my own, I'll always have your work to look back on to help inspire me. Thank you, truly.

Wow, I'm a whole year and a bit behind on getting around to read this story, like the schmuck I am.

I've gotta say, I'm enjoying Axel's whole "coming of age", if you will, probably because it's thoroughly different than Roxas' story (although in The Unfamiliar you didn't begin the story with his own childhood experience).

I won't lie, I'm a tad bummed that you stopped writing after chapter ten and because the obsession Axel has with watching Roxas, as explained in TU, wasn't quite visited. But at the same time I realize I haven't a clue why you stopped writing, nor do I have a say in how you process things.

Anyhow, as always, your work has blown me away. You're definitely one of my favorite fan fiction authors and I look up to you for the quality of your writing. And once I get off my lazy ass and actually begin to write fics. of my own, I'll always have your work to look back on to help inspire me. Thank you, truly.

Sad as I am that this will likely never be continued (or it'll be continued the day after I die (Murphy's freakin' Law), its really fun to read. Demyx kinda reminds me of me, and I was sad for Sora.

But ya know, I have this weird, optomistic trend, so I'm gonna put it on story alerts on the off chance you get an idea, and are like, "Ohaithar, this story still exists! And its not done? *Gasp* That's against my morals and values of a writer! TO THE KEYBOARD!"

So... yeah. That's whats up. Bye.

I love this story, like, A LOT. Especially after reading The Unfamiliar. I'm a sucker for getting the emotions from both sides of the relationship, and I'm even more of a sucker for a head-over-heels Axel.

I know you haven't updated in almost-literally FOREVER, but can you try to take it off hiatus? It's killing me leaving it at this cliff-hanger. I know how hard it is to find inspiration for stories sometimes -I'm currently experiencing a seemingly perpetual state of Writer's Block- so take as long as you need to update as long as you update EVENTUALLY. Please?

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Awesome story! It's really cool reading this after reading the Unfamiliar! I love the plot!

This is great! :D

I haven't read this story in so long. I recently reread it.

Why don't you continue it? It's absolutely amazing!

All in all, UPDATE IT!

Not that this'll do you much good, but pleasepleasepleaseplease magically regain your inspiration/time to write this and take it off hiatus!

It's magnificent.

- Anon