Holy ..! That is incredible. I love how he's got burning back in his past too, and nightmares just like Sweeney and Johanna... Great job!

I love how you wove the four parts together. The part about the fire was particularly affecting.

My goodness, this has been written absolutely wonderfully. I especially loved the line where you wrote how a blackened arm is clawing its way out of hell, and the last line was especially haunting, dark, and lovely. I think it's very sweet how Mrs. Lovett comforts Toby, but how they come back in the asylum and how he cries for her. It made me feel very sad. You tugged my heartstrings, friend. Can't wait to read more from you!

I loved this. Poor Toby tho!
I'm glad to finally see some Toby fics out there

poor Toby.. The thing that is so interestion about Mrs. Lovett is she has three sides of her. 1) She's in love with Mr. Todd and tries to show she cares. 2) She loves to help him get revenge and is great at her pie making. 3) shes so affectionate to Toby. Like a long lost mother he never had.. ah.