great story but you really need to add more chapters!

Not bad. I like ur idea for using a Charmed theme. I do have a few suggestion though...Why not use Sora as like an enemy or something? Since the two look alike, u could use it as a plot twist...

Keep writing!

Ha-ha! This is awesome! Keep updating, and thanks so much for thinking outside the box. I defintely believe this'll be a very original fanfic and I'm looking forward to future chapters! If you ever need a beta reader, I'm your gal!

-Leeland

This is actually a good story. Keep the updates up.

Lol. Sorry that I don't have any super coolio ideas for you...

But I did enjoy reading this chapter!!

Interesting story =o

I can't wait to see how it unfolds ^^

Aw, this story is so cute! If you hadn't just updated, I'd tell you to update faster cause this is so damn cute! :D

Hehe. Yay for Roxas to learn magic!! This chapter was pretty cool!

This story is really cute and I like how it's going =D Make the next chapter realy long for us spoiled reviewers becasue this is just TOO CUTE

dis be ummayzuhzing! iluvitiluvitiluvit!

seriously, its wonderful keep up da good work and

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

~ROckER

Hey there!
So this is intriguing. You have a very unique and modern writing style, which I am still adjusting to (in general... we're reading modernist work right now for English) but I definitely like the take on it.

In some places, you have a bit of awkward wording, but you'll learn to help the flow of the story over time. However, you probably have progressed in this department already -- I'm definitely going to check out the rest of the story when I have time next week (SPRING BREAK! HALLELUJAH!).

Your ideas are very interesting, and I'd be glad to help you out anytime. :)

Love, jiv3y

I'm REALLY liking this story.
Magic & Kingdom Hearts. Yay.

You meant 'mug' right? I normally wouldn't mention it, but I was slow to catch on that there was no 'bug of hot chocolate'.

So Rox is a warlock. Yay.

I'm tired, so I'm cutting this short.

Good job, and good luck with the future chapters.

~The Critic, Zoa

Wow... Poor Roxas. He's so out of the loop... But I'm started to understand more now. Awesome job!

I haven't actually watch Charmed, so I can't say if I'd like it or not, but it does seem interesting. I would like to know more about it! Update again!

I like this.
Simple beggining, a secret, and a mystery.

You've deffinatly captured the Charmed feeling of "What-the-hell-is-going-on!!".
*laughs*
I can't wait to see how this will turn out.

~The Critic, Zoa