Good work so far.

10/10, write more please.

They hit the breaking point already? Wow. And it was Tear who suggested to end the relationship, too. Oh, I hope they'll be able to find some way to make this work before that actually happens.

And Anise catches on a lot faster than Asch believed. Looks like he'll have to make his decision real soon.

I liked the chapter, but there were a few errors in the beginning.

Whew! I thought Tear would sure break up with Luke at the news.So Anise saw Asch?I wonder what happens next.Tear and Natalia keeping secrets from Luke?Serves him right. Haha.

Tear and Natalia are on the case! I wonder why Asch wasn't one of the options... I guess they didn't think about it. Can't wait to see more!

Yay for Asch returness! Boo for Asch cowardice! Get your ass over to Natalia and propose already! I can't believe I haven't noticed this fic before. (: Typical that Anise would be the first to find out.

Ohh dear. How easily this mere spotting could spin out of control into a completely crazy and asinine quest--from the perspective of one who's in on the dramatic irony, anyway. Although, the idea itself would make for a plot, if their assumptions about yet another replica had any truth in them...

...Wow, just thinking about that gets me excited. XD But of course, that would take away from the general plot, and besides, it's your story and no one should object to where you take it! (Especially the overzealous readers. Ahem.)

But I ramble. Ending notes: I love the dramatic irony, but I still have to whine a bit about getting confused during the lengthly exchanges, ie between Natalia and Tear. :P Alas, some things never change.

Great work and keep writing (even through your busy schedule)! :)

This story starts good, so much tension and emotions.

hm interesting. Looks like Luke is going to have to think of something pretty quick hey? ^.~

I found some of the lines in the first scene a little fragmented, but the rest of the chapter was great. We'll have to see how things turn out in the next =D

So Tear is already doubting their relationship...that sucks. I wonder how she'd react with the news of Baticul's sudden decision.

I did catch a small error towards the middle of the chapter. A small technical error when Natalia mentioned that they were fighting for "years" to get equal status for replicas, though it seems like it's been less than two years...unless I misread somewhere in the first chapter.

It was pretty good, especially with Asch finally deciding to take an active role.

Heheh, what a fine example of being mean to your favorites. Poor Asch...

Well, those fantasy rants have made me extra nitpicky, but I won't go into detail here...

So yeah, I'm eager to see how things turn out. Tear seemed kind of absent, but I'm sure you'll bring her in much more next chap so they can break up. Update soon!

Oh dear, another twist, have we? As if things romantically enough. Then again, "The course of true love never runs smooth." quoth Shakespeare. Hrrmm...

A few typos, but nothing too big. ^^ I found that... a few things lack descriptions, mostly pre- and post- dialogue. A little bit more here and there can really make a big difference; it could also impact how the reader interprets what the characters say, adding more depth to the story overall. Or at least, that's my view. And, of course, if that's just not your style, then by all means feel free to ignore what I just said. You've got a great story, nevrtheless, don't ever forget that! ^^

This is good. I know this doesn't sound like a proper review, but I'm not that good constructive criticism. XD

This is really good! I have no crits for you for the chapter. Keep writing!

Problems on two fronts for Luke, eh? Geez...
You know, somehow, as much as I wish it not to reason, I can't see their relationship going too smoothly...too many issues that will probably come up that would strain Luke's and Tear's love for one another to the breaking point. But I do think that somehow, they'll make it.

Wanderlust...I did my research on the term - I am certainly looking forward to see how Luke will deal with it.

And Asch...why is he being such a coward? Hm. Strange.

Nice start.

And here I was thinking this was a one-shot! What a wonderful surprise! :D

I love the title, and the problem facing Luke and Tear seems very real. Asch's as well, but seeing as we don't really know what /his/ problem is, I can only assume. Though, there's little doubt towards that assumption. :)

Excellent work. I will be sure to keep an eye on this.