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Ha haa! I hope you update, if you plan to, because this is really good. I like your writing, especially characterization (Tres shows emotion for the first time when he sees his hair in the mirror) and description. You have a few minor spelling errors but nothing big. Please write more. Poor William. He doesn't know what he's got till it's gone, huh?

I couldn't stop laughing! It just got worse, and worse, and WORSE! xD I need to breathe...God you gotta write more!! I need a good laugh!!

It's the rosencreutz's most feared weapon!!

THE BAD HAIR DAY FTW.

haha that was cute ^_^
I love the ideas of the guys caring as much if not more about their looks than girls, which is so very true *sigh*
Isaak, acting like a child, is priceless ^_^
Excellent job!