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moonie44foreternity
2009-05-17 . chapter 3
Hi! I totally love the new chapter! And Lexara is JUST perfect! PPMS!
Sir Thames
2009-05-16 . chapter 3
I'm pleasantly surprised to see this. It's a wonderful story. Spot on.
Chlollie
2009-05-15 . chapter 3
Nice, I hope you will have Chloe find out about Kara, also being a meteor freak, I like that storyline for her.
Jeremy Shane
2009-05-15 . chapter 3
good chapter & more please
bob
2009-02-26 . chapter 1
i like this story you need to keep doing it,i think someone should also make a davis version of smallville
astrum-faith
2009-02-02 . chapter 2
Please continue this story. I've only just discovered it and I've read both the chapters and I really want to know what happens next! You've finished with Lex being told to convince Kara to be experimented on! How can you stop now? :( I wanna know what happens!
And now I'm going to actually review, as opposed to grizzling about you not updating often.
Seriously, you don't seem to have a problem writing a 16 year old girl - I'm a fifteen year old girl and, sure, this isn't like me, but then I'm not an average girl and I'm certainly not from Krypton! Really, you did a great job, and it's very realistic. Be proud of yourself! I don't know a lot of guys who could write a half-decent chapter with a female lead (actually, I don't think I know any), and this is really good.
I want to see Lex and Kara together again! She was so shy! I'm not asking for them to kiss or touch or anything, or even like each other as friends - I just enjoyed having them in the same scene. Is that weird? Oh, I don't care, I've already written it down, haven't I?
Lionel's being mean! Sorry, had to get that in, because it's true. :) I really want to see Lionel get punched unconscious at some point!
Of course, you already have a rough outline, and I don't expect you to change it just 'cause I asked. *puppy-dog eyes* IF you can get something like that in, please include it! Even if he trips! I don't mind what happens as long as SOMETHING happens to him! If possible. And I know it probably won't be possible. Oh well. I'll keep reading anyway! :)
Anyway, please update soon!
kara is cool
2009-01-22 . chapter 2
you really need to finsh this it is good i hope the thrid one we see her powers shown more
bill
2009-01-21 . chapter 2
i think this story will be good once you finsh it,really good
cRaZyGuRl093
2008-12-24 . chapter 2
Awesome chappie :DD


... && story :P


I always liked the fact that Kara's character was created in Smallville to help Clark with his past, etc. :)

...&& because of the bond that they share (:


...Anyways I liked how you have taken everything && made it so that it wouldn't be like Clark's life :D


Can't wait for the next update :0)
Rain Addict CM
2008-12-16 . chapter 2
interesting so far! it will be cool to see where this goes =) if you continue with this at least
moonie44foreternity
2008-10-28 . chapter 2
OMG! I absolutely love chapter 2! Please continue this fanfic!
moonie44foreternity
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
I absolutely love love love LOVE this story! I'm going to read Chapter 2 now! It's amazing!
Sir Thames
2008-10-15 . chapter 2
It's a lot better than the Smallville series on tv. Carry on.
Spidey2
2008-09-22 . chapter 2
loved it! keep going!...
Jeremy Shane
2008-09-18 . chapter 2
good chapter & more please
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