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| Angel Ayaka 2008-09-30 ch 6,  | abuseThis is a really well written story. You are so descriptive and detailed. Are you still working on more chapters? I really hope you do continue. Good job! |
| crossmyheartforever 2008-09-23 ch 6, | abuseKatsuro-Chan (may I call you that?), you have a splendid ability to make readers captured by your writing. I felt like I was personally witnessing the events, and the feeling was so realistic, I must praise you. The plot of the story is very unique, told from various view points, and yet still very much in sync. With each pov, readers understand the emotions and feelings connected a bit more. I really believe this a succesful story, and very much support you in your writing and future works. Good luck! |
| Celare 2008-09-18 ch 3, | abuse:D That was damn sexy. Your choice of words is just perfect for creating a heated atmosphere. Yum. |
| Celare 2008-09-18 ch 2, | abuseYay! 100th review! Well, what can I say? This chapter was quite endearing, since it was in the ever-innocent Yuki's POV. The kiss was quite endearing as well. :D |
| Celare 2008-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was... delicious. :F |
| Lugger 2008-08-22 ch 2, | abusehehe, Chapter 2 was a funny one ^_^ Yuki the fan girl XD |
| Lugger 2008-08-22 ch 1, | abuseaww, Zero! T^T my god, you really packed in the angst! kudos to you ^_^ |
| NekoDoodle 2008-08-09 ch 6, | abuseWoah, the idea of each chapter being from different people's view points is genius. And I'm really liking what I'm reading. |
| angelthewriter 2008-08-08 ch 6, | abuseawesome! GOOD JOB! :) :) :) :) :) |
| Black Shadow of the Dark 2008-08-03 ch 6, | abusewoah, that was nice. Kaname and Zero musta been really into each other if they didn't notice Aido and Yuki's presence, hehe. I love this story, and I hope you will update it soon! |
| law-chan23 2008-08-03 ch 6, | abuseihfejknelhesfivnjopqnbeuhks! *Flail* *_* Just...me...speechless...Zero...Kaname... *flail* |
| RandomChibiDemon-chan 2008-07-16 ch 6, | abuseNO! IT ENDED! TT.TT I really love this story!! Its so romantic... And just for the record, I enjoyed Kaname biting Zero. Im a perv, I know, but I thought that was exteremly sweet. You must keep writing!... Pwease? |
| sylphstarwind 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuse*claps* Nope, great job on keeping them in character. With the slash fics, I half expect something really obvious and OOC, but this was a good start - they aren't just lusting for each other out of nowhere or some crud. And I do like Yuuki with Zero, so I'm glad there was the bit about her in there, too. A couple of the spots had some writing flaws, I think, but still worth reading. |
| Silver Star Celine 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abuseWhoo! I love you! (as in a sisterly way Xd) Thank you for not making Yuki evil like most typical fanfics with this kind of events. o Yuki turning into a Yaoi fangirl! Go girl! Join us! We have ...er um...green tea ice cream! XP |
| Morena Evensong 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseNice story, I like it. The descriptions are amazing and you manage to convey some powerful emotions really well. Also, very erotic. And I like that, while you switch pov's, you're not retelling the same scene 3 times, but that each perspective moves the story forward a bit. |