c'mon you have finish this. This is a great story.

Update it on aff soon please I was l

woah! id LOVE to hear more of this!

I saw this on like two years ago and never did leave a review either due to the site or could not find it the next day, but holy fuck this fic was so awesome! Truly one of the most sexy fics I have read in my decade of reading different fanfics of DBZ. I would loved to see a new chapter; it would make my year.

Nice!I'm not sure about the sexual stuff though, but at least there's a fic in which videl has been crushing on vegeta, there was another though [not sexual or lemon or anything like that but romance/angst/drama type fic of videl and vegeta],too bad it got deleted before i got it printed,such a nice fic though but what's even worse is that i dont even remember the author who wrote it,[The name of the fic was'I Love Videl'',18 chapters total],anyway other than the romance stuff...could anyone imagine how strong videl would have gotten if she had trained under vegeta's tutelage rather than gohan' ... a force to be reckoned with and strongest of the human ,Tien,Krillin [Potential Unlocked]and Chiaotzu would'nt even compare to her if that were to happen.I hope they mention it as a what if story in Dragon Ball:Raging Blast 3 [if it were to be developed].

Well how long till the next chapter lol

u shud continue never seen a fic like this one b4 its different i like it update plz

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