 gothgirl1245 2010-01-04 . chapter 23Please write more it is really good |
 -yLOVEtwilight4EVER- 2010-01-03 . chapter 23next!
it is a verry good story ! i love this story!
you are a great author!!
btw: don't look at my english i come from holland and i'm not verry good in english
Xx -yLOVEtwilight4EVER- |
 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night 2009-11-04 . chapter 12kool |
 LiVeUrLiFe011 2009-10-18 . chapter 23PLEASE UPDATE! |
 gilo 2009-10-03 . chapter 23ah i love it love it love it!! but you cant leave it there! what happens next? is jake okay?
post more soon! please please posr more soon! :) |
 stacie23103 2009-08-17 . chapter 23omg, great story, i love the twists and ideas you have. i can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon, keep up the good work |
 hikari mae 2009-08-06 . chapter 23that is very mean of you to stop it at the best part :( please update update UPDATE! |
 setsuna1415 2009-05-30 . chapter 18i like the story! |
 vkballerina 2009-05-03 . chapter 23i love this story but you haven't updated in ages. please finish this story, it has alot of potential. Firstly it has a good solid storyline. Second it has good length chapters and a good amount of them. and lastly i like it and i'm sure that everyone else does to so please update soon! |
 0Warrior0Maiden0 2009-02-17 . chapter 23NO! Cliffie! You really shouldn't do that to people, it doesn't help you make any friends.
This is an amazing story so far, I love the way all the Cullens and the Wolves are in Charater, Bella's a bit off, but then she's only one third human in this story, so she's allowed to be a little OOC.
Bella might want to start having nightmares about the upcoming battle, she's nervous enough. Well, she probably doesn't want to, but I would make her suffer if I were you, soory that sounded evil.
Well keep writing, and solve that cliffie soon. |
 humaneamy 2009-02-15 . chapter 23that was so cool. what going to happen next can't wait is bella going to gain her whole powers by being in a cicrle with all of the elements surronding her (almost like avatar: the last air bender) |
 oinkityoink06 2009-01-24 . chapter 23love it. :) next chapter, please. :) |
 Babycakes23 2009-01-24 . chapter 23no! y oh y must you end with cliffies! why?/ keep it up plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?! |
 bebepantheon 2009-01-01 . chapter 23hi luv the story please update the next chapter!! |
 Haunted by Waffles 2008-12-31 . chapter 23Hurry up and review! I'm waiting! |