LOL, OMFG I LOVED IT!
i love how you used the word "Glomped", lol, my friends are obsessed with that word and whenever i walk into the halls at school my smallest friend always does a running 'glomp' and nearly knocks me over.
anywhoo,
one spelling error that i found ythat i thought i would point out,... you forgot the "G" in big, so at the moment, she is a Bi Sister

"she was going to be the best bi sister ever"

:D You got this challenge too? I did as well...how does Joey come up with things like that? Who knows...it's Jo!:) Great job with it by the way...absolutely loved it!:) I was laughing my butt off while reading it...especially when Jake asked if he could have a hamster when his parents were having "private time". Loved it!!

Really made me laugh and I needed that :) Great job!!

funny.. "having private time so loud" that's funny

This made me smile and I needed that.

Great short story

That was great !

*smiles*

lol - typical boy reaction!

That's great! I love that last line! Great story :)

omg! I LOVE YOU! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU! it has! SO MUCH! have I mentioned that I LOVE YOU?...


that was awesome... completely awesome...really...AWESOME!... and btw... hehehehehehehehe! Sara got glomped!... I wonder if other people know wtf it is?...Hm...

anyway... IT'S AWESOME!