It's okay. I guess I'm not a big fan of re-write and adding characters to scenes. But it's okay.

I think the fanfic was awesome, keep writing.

Okay, dude. You need to check your pairings because you put this under a slash category and it so isn't slash. So change the character search bars.

Love it! I can't wait to read the sequels! Great job!

DAP

aww that was such a great story loved the ending great job!