I like this story it's very cute ^.^

That was beautiful :)

I applaud you
-Ayane

Phenomenal. A beautiful representation of an unseen side of their relationship, especially given that you did it with under 1 0 words. The style is great, the story is good and surprisingly innocent considering who and what it deals with. As far as I can tell, grammar and spelling are flawless. It is, overall, a perfectly executed story. I applaud you.

~Strong, Sweet, Spartan Elegance

Loved it, but you have to change the rating to M. Thumbs up!