great story so far

VERY cool story, please keep it up/ continue it.

CUTE Story.

This is SHORT but GOOD! When are you EVER going to continue? Do I have to stalk you and erge you to update? What's the point of reviewing if I have no clue whether you are or not going to updat this thig? What writer doesn't love to get reviews? Reviews are awsome! You gotta update this thing! If you need ideas then e-mail me please! I would love to give you some! Peace out! _

Pyro

OMG..U CANT STOP THERE...**POUTING
THIS STORY IS INTRESSTING..CANT WAIT 2 U'LL UPDATE SOON..N PLZ MAKE IT QUICK...

BYEZ

Good fic!

Update it! lol I really like your story...sounds a lot like my school...well...not really but yeah it kinda sounds like a typical high school...so yeah I think that it's really great and you need to write more of it!

Mel

Wow, great story keep it up. put up the next chap soon, please.

I'm not sure if you're aware of the fact that you pretty much screwed up all the names. If you are going to use these characters please spell their names right. It's Zoicite, not Zoiscite. And Kunzite not Malachite. Not to mention the fact that Jadeite/Jedite's name is usually not spelled Jedeite. Also, since the Dub names are crap and cheap, lame versions. Why don't you use Usagi, Mamoru, Rei, Minako, Makoto, Motoki (Andrew),Ami, Ryo (Greg), Yuuchirou (Chad), Shinozaki (Ken), and Ace, (the only guy Venus was seriously involved with). If you really want to write a good Sailor Moon fic, why don't you get the facts straight, huh?

great story! When will you be updating? please keep the chapter coming. Cna't wai till the next chapter comes.

I'm sooo glad Rei broke up w/Chad. She is much bettered suited for Jadeite) fanfic ASAP_

interesting... the generals of the past versus the present guys...i like it however your chapters are *TOO* short you should try to combine them together sometimes people won't read stories cuzz it appears long and u have *12* chapters.. but besides that continue the great work and hurry up with the zoi and ami pairing!

Whoaa...it's been waaay too long since you last updated. Perhaps, I was a bit late to discover this developing story. Your plotline is great, there's some interesting stuff, but what's keeping it from being a great story are, one, your chapters are too short, it should be longer. Two, your transitions are too long. Otherwise, it's a great plot. I hope you still write this story and I'm eager to see you continue writing it. Peace!

This story is really great... I read this a long time ago, and I'm just reviewing now, but it's taking a long time for you to update this... when are you going to anyway?

S'up PINK! Ya gotta get this next part out. It's getting really good. Your writing is even improving too. Anywayz, talk to ya later! Ciao!