Reviews for max and twilight crossover

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PoLkAdOtFeAtHeRs 2008-05-11 ch 17,	abuseum...why?
MaxWannaBe 2008-05-11 ch 17, anon.	abuseDon't worry your not the only persin that has a hot haed as a dad! URG aren't they annoying. Sorry you can't e- mail me but my hot head for a dad doesn't like me giving out my e- mail! But thank you for explaining yourself. I appreciate it!! You must be going through a lot. sry. Trust me I am a patient person even though to you i am not but it's only because it's my favorite story! Keep writeing/typing. O and for the advice this time... write more or move chapters along faster. I like you making the story your own with changing ella and all. But don't get too carried away with the changing. Sry i still stand by faxness but whatever. Sry againg for the long review. Thanx again for explaining yourself. and ooppss im repeating myself a lot aren't I!
Someone aka Me 2008-05-10 ch 17,	abuseWell then. That was good!! I like it!! It will be interesting to see what you do with Ella in the story!
JetLinkon 2008-05-10 ch 4,	abuseI thought the insert swear word here was funny. Thats cool, you don't swear?
JetLinkon 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseOMG, that was really good! but that kind of ruined something for me. You see, I haven't finished the Maximum Ride books. But I don't care. And you could try harder with spelling.
-Maximum-Twilight-Ride- 2008-05-10 ch 17,	abuseCool! Please update! I wanna see what's up with Jacob. Please Update soon!
Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abuseOk, that is just too awesome!
-Maximum-Twilight-Ride- 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abuseIt's okay about the update, I'm just glad you did! That was amazingly funny that Max is going to sing infront of Jacob AND be in his band! Update soon plz!
Someone aka Me 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abuseShort but good! I was not expecting that!
vvvvvvvvvv 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abusedear MaxWannaBe, idky, but i am unable to email you. so i am doing this instead. i would like to say in my defence that it is the end of school and my parents are not please w/ my grades. and if i dont bring them up, there be hell to pay. also, i am slightly unhappy now-a-days, because my dad tells me i need to get my life together, (what am i on drugs?!) i try to reason w/ him i'm only in middle school. but he is such a hot head and he does not like that i am a very forgetful person, (which explains my grades). i try to tell him thats just who i am (im more forgetful than my grannie! serious, at least 1 this year i forgot what grade im in and 5 times at least my scheadule and locker combonation) but he refuses to listen. so he is hiding my books, but im getting even (can't tell you how). for you other quetion about the old me, well im still a little bummed that max 4 sucked eggs!! my opionion of course and feel free to disagree, (but i have a strong argument) i am trying not to let my life or opionions effect my writing, but please be paitent. ~v Ps: i'll try to update soon.
MaxWannaBe 2008-05-09 ch 16, anon.	abuseYour getting there. For advice i will tell you that you need to write more in each chapter, write multiple chapters and post them at the same time, or move the story along a lot and I mean A LOT! Faster! All that really happened was she found out she got the part, her feelings about the dance and knew the pack was the band That's all! KEEP WRITING, WHERE'S THE OLD YOU!
Shatchi 2008-05-06 ch 15,	abuseYes...updating soon would be a good idea, before certain people decide to come and wring the story out of you. I like the MaxXJacob thing. It's nice and new. I wish you would put some other flock POV's. I really would like to know how they're taking this whole thing. Nice job, keep it up.
Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram 2008-05-02 ch 15,	abuseAWESOME! I Honestly never thought that i would ever find a story that was a cross of these two! there my favorite books of all time! This is just too awesome!
MaxWannaBe 2008-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt was o.k.. You seem to be not yourself or not into it or something. It was a filler and o.k. and if you ever put a song in there I would suggest that you write more because some people skip the songs because they don't care about the song and can pick up from where the story left off. Don't be the kind of author that forgets there first story just because they created another one. Anyway you've got to remember that the flock is still on the run soo where are the erasers? Overall, just get back to old yourself!
Pikaseel 2008-05-01 ch 15,	abuseI'm loving your story!! It's brilliant! Twilight combined with Maximum Ride? Best. Choice. EVER!!

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