Simply great! Hope you'll continue it, though...

Hey!

I really like your writing and even though you still can improve it here and there, I find this quite interesting to read.
I've also read 'Challenge' and just completley loved it! (sorry for not reviewing there, but I'm just a lazy reviewer, seriously x.X)
Anyway I'm really curious about the progress you've made, and of course I just wanna know how the story turns out! (My vote definitly goes to Griff tho =D)
Anyways, please update! I'm sure that a lot of people would like that!

Hopefully that convinced you =D
x.~Kira

Cliffhanger. No~!
Like it though.
Great detailing.

dude. update. This story is amazing! I love it! The fact that you're taking yout times hooking them up rather than just throwing them together is awesome, and you rock!
~~Lunadia~~

you know, whenever i read something about jumper, it always seems to end with david kissing griffin!! i hate to be rude, but that is just wrong. david isnt gay.

AH!! I'm BEGGING you to update!! You can't just leave us off like that! *whiney sob* PLEASE. I'll love you forever. :[

Kult, en annen nordmann!:D

Your awesome.

just started reading this! It's amazing. I need more Griffin/David NOW.

Can't wait for another chapter!! You're a great writer.

woho! finally they kissed! awesome!! omg i couldn't help laughing when i imagined Griffin being attacked by that dog XD heh heh poor Griff. but really amazing writing, the details and imagery just keep getting better and better with each chapter! I really felt like i was in Oslo, i could practically smell the cherries! can't wait for more!

WHAT?!! Screw Millie! Keeping kissing Griffin! Damnit! ... I hate cliff hangers...they're so mean! *crys* Lol! Great job. I love it!

YAY, THEY KISSED! XD I seriously love this fic.


And I would also love if they jumped to Brazil, y'know, maybe in a city near São Paulo, named Campinas. *pretends she doensn't live in this city* damn it, now I'm gonna keep thinking how fun it would be to meet them on the street. :P


Anyway, great job!

LIPLOCK! Great chappie! ^^

Oh yeah, that was a great chapter.

Woah, that was unexpected... Poor Millie... I loved it! Update soon please, and good luck!