 Village-Mystic 2008-03-26 . chapter 5Good chapter tag. Cardiff and Wales are really so small, that it works for this as the ongoing thing. They've done it in some episodes, and you did a nice set up of proving the point earlier in the story. |
 Village-Mystic 2008-03-26 . chapter 2This is very cute, even if I can't tell who you SGA scientists are supposed to be (never really caught on with that show). |
 ejgfiwegfliuwg 2008-03-26 . chapter 3OMG this is such a stargate/torchwood crossover That so rocks! |
 ejgfiwegfliuwg 2008-03-26 . chapter 2I do hope that the John Sheperd refered to in this was the one from Stargate Atlantis, he is so HOT!!
Darmok |
 Reefgirl 2008-03-26 . chapter 6"Ianto was cut short by Lydia suddenly lunging for him. He let out a yelp of surprise as she wrapped her arms around him and next thing he knew they were hitting the metal grating. At first he thought that something was going to explode or fall right where he had been standing but then when he stopped seeing stars realized that Lydia was hugging him quite hard."
That is EXACTLY how I saw Lydia reacting to the fact that Ianto liked Bruce Campbell. I've loved this little fic, it's been brilliant, thanks for doing it |
 Reefgirl 2008-03-21 . chapter 5“Well we know how to keep a secret.” Max spoke up. “Honestly, it seems that half the town, if not all of it, knows about you. Doesn’t ‘secret organization’ mean anything to you guys?”
I love that line and Alex and Radek are still an item, wonderful. I'd love to see Radek's face when Alex tells him about Owen. Brilliant as ever |
 The Creeping Spleen 2008-03-14 . chapter 4Tribble Replicators!?!?! Now there's a horrible thought...
Personally, I've always thought Ianto was secretly a 70's Blaxsploitation movie nut. Shaft, Foxy Brown, Coffy, that kind of thing. It contrasts well with his whole buttoned down exterior.
That and I can just hear him growling out "Chew on that sucka!" as he blows away a bad guy. ;) |
 Reefgirl 2008-03-14 . chapter 4Yay! Ianto the Bruce Campbell fan comes out, and tribble replicators fantastic |
 Medie Shanachie 2008-03-13 . chapter 4i normally wait til the end to review, but i had to after you quoted army of darkness. woot! that was great and too hysterical that it was ianto quoting it!
i'm loving this, but where's lorne?!
can't wait for more!
*giggles* sorry, but the girls are so reminding me of my aiden...oh lordy i can just imagine her with jack--she'd probably knee him in the nuts when he hit on her. |
 Reefgirl 2008-03-08 . chapter 3Uh-Oh, replicators If Owen and Alex are together you're going to have to up the ratings to an M when the bad language starts. I'm loving this I really am |
 The Creeping Spleen 2008-03-08 . chapter 3Oh, ye plot thickens... ;)
Now, I don't mean to keep kicking holes in your story, but...
As far as anyone knows, the Cardiff Rift has been there since at least Victorian times (mid 19th century).
Remember the Dr. Who ep "The Unquiet Dead"? |
 The Creeping Spleen 2008-02-29 . chapter 2Hm... Maybe this is just me, but I think it would've been more fun to have Max and the girls alomst (but not quite) bump into Jack and the Torchwood gang on two or three different occasions.
However, it's your story, you do what you want. ;)
One minor niggle though - to the best of my knowledge, British pubs don't serve beer in pitchers.
It comes in pints and half pints for your traditional beers, lagers, and ciders. |
 Reefgirl 2008-02-28 . chapter 2Yes, Jack could be Sheppard's brother and now Martha's involved things are gonna get messy. I loved Lydia's dealing with Jack, so Lydia |
 The Creeping Spleen 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Bravo! Bravo! Encore!
Genuinely, unashamedly, laugh out loud funny.
Lovely stuff. More please. |
 Reefgirl 2008-02-22 . chapter 1This is shaping up to be brilliant, I can't wait for Lydia to meet Jack |