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godessoftrees
2009-11-27 . chapter 32
OMG, I loved the ending with Bella whispering in Esme's ear. I so loved the Epilogue and now I'm off to start the sequel!
godessoftrees
2009-11-27 . chapter 31
I think this was my favorite chapter. I loved the exchange between Bella and Edward. It was so intense, but just perfect.
godessoftrees
2009-11-27 . chapter 30
You are so lucky they filmed Twilight in your town, at least parts of it. I didn't understand why they didn't film New Moon in Oregon, but I guess they had a good enough reason. At least the houses were the same. They obviously went back for that, at least it makes the most sense.

Anyway on to the story, I'm glad Edward changed Bella, I think I said that in my review last chapter. I hope he comes back really soon. I know he couldn't stay away from Bella for long.
godessoftrees
2009-11-24 . chapter 29
I think your romantic scenes are just fine for having no experience. And I'm really happy that Edward bit her!
godessoftrees
2009-11-24 . chapter 28
Short chapter but a good one.
godessoftrees
2009-10-30 . chapter 25
And if the Volturi doesn't kill her they'll change her so either way Edward either has to turn/see her turned or see her get killed.
godessoftrees
2009-10-30 . chapter 24
Yay! Bella's safe! Now let's hope she doesn't get herself into any more trouble, as she does tend to do that.
godessoftrees
2009-10-30 . chapter 23
God I hope it was Edward! Poor Bella's scared out of her wits!
godessoftrees
2009-10-30 . chapter 22
Yet again, I don't see these chapters as boring. More like they just set the stage for what's to come. I love them either way!
godessoftrees
2009-10-12 . chapter 21
I don't think these last chapters were boring in the least bit. It's building up and helping us to understand better.
godessoftrees
2009-10-11 . chapter 20
I understand the being too tired to keep writing. Done it many times myself. I tend to just leave it for later rather than actually ending the chapter there. But that's just me.
moscalover
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
I love this story
godessoftrees
2009-09-24 . chapter 18
Wow. I definitely would never have guessed that it would be Carlisle to find Edward. This was an excellent chapter!
godessoftrees
2009-09-24 . chapter 17
Oh I hope Edward gets better soon so he can kick Jacob's **!
godessoftrees
2009-09-24 . chapter 16
Oh God I hope its not Jacob. I wonder what he would be doing out there though.
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