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| icemaster91 2008-04-22 ch 9, | abusethis chapter is just a repeat of the last |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-03-18 ch 10, | abuseO,O that's the end? huh? NO! WHY WAS I NOT TOLD? I'M YOUR BETA! *breaks down in tears* |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-03-16 ch 8, | abusethis chappie was pretty cool!! and btw...why didn't you smother us in Hiei/Zura action? i want to see that! isn't that what fluff is supposed to be about? O.o |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseaw...this chappie is so kawaii!! |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-03-16 ch 6, | abuseokay!! this chappie is all good now!! NO! DON'T PASS OUT!! WE NEED YOU TO WRITE! lol Zura's birth is sweet!! oh, and i'll be starting a contest here pretty soon!! whee!! ^^ |
| Koori Youkai Hime 2008-03-16 ch 10, | abusesequel, sequel, SEQUEL! i will read more! muahahaha! |
| Autumn Whispers 2008-03-16 ch 10, | abuseOo, that's evil. Nuh uh! You did NOT just end your story there! I expect a sequel very soon, okay? >.> But it was really cute. I absolutely loved this last chapter, but I'm wondering what happened to Zura. *sigh* I'm guessing you wanted unanswered questions in the end of your story? And lol. Hiei killed Yusuke. (But he didn't at the same time, isn't that cool? And i'm exhausted, so this might be why I'm acting like that...) |
| Koori Youkai Hime 2008-03-15 ch 8, | abuse*hits over the head with Hiei's katana* how could you stop there?! there was some yummy hiei/zura action, the bad guys gonna show up, and then BOOM! you end it??! you will update soon or else! *gestures to a waiting Hiei* *evil grin* |
| Autumn Whispers 2008-03-15 ch 8, | abuseYo. I kinda figured you'd do that, with all the weird cackling you were doing. Never thought i'd be paired with Kurama, though. Or maybe I did. Ah well, it's not that important anyway. But I still need to review your three chapters...and everything else...oy vey. Also I'm depressed at the fact that my brother is totally owning me at Guitar Hero now...and he's 4. Okee. So the Light Killers (that sounds strangely morbid, though I wouldn't mind if it was dark all the time, as long as the moon was out) are after Zura? And Trentone and Serapheth are members and they are looking for her? Who else is in the light killers and what do they want with Zura? And Hiei and Zura are so cute! And lol, I just realized that Autumn colors are red breen brown and orange. >.> Took me long enough. |
| Koori Youkai Hime 2008-03-11 ch 5, | abusei just found this story and i love it! update soon please?! *puppy eyes* |
| Autumn Whispers 2008-03-07 ch 5, | abuse"llamas llamas llamas llamas lammas...Chocolate!" Hee, you're lucky, I sold my soul to some albino hermit/hobo thing on the side of the rode for a rock, half a pixie stick, and five bucks. I found it funny that Hiei was frozen to the spot but felt himself go hot. Isn't that like an oximoron? Oo, Hiei tackled Zura to the ground, and Yusuke's gonna get it! (and yes, he IS a PERVO!!) Why is it that everyone seems to have a nickname for Kurama and Kurama only? Like someone gave Kurama the nickname Kura-kit for Kurama kitsune. (Probably becasue he's the only one that's nice enough to put up with it...can you imagine what Hiei would do to Zura if she gave him a nickname?...) But anyhoo, you left Kurama totally out! Where did he go after Zura ran off? (Which, I might add, was weird that runs off and he can't catch up to her...but that's not important right now.) And whee, I feel so special! This is the first someone's included me in their author's notes! ^-^ Remind me to return the favor once I get my YYH one-shot up...(which pretty much stinks, but oh well!) |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-03-07 ch 5, | abusehaha...sometimes i get so into reading the story that i forget to edit as i go so i have to keep going back!! ^^; it's just so good!! btw...did you see the little note i left for you at the end?? |
| sensitive 2008-03-02 ch 4, anon. | abusegood chapter |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abusewoohoo for edited works!! lol..i'm glad you got it fixed and again, wonderful job!! *sniff* it makes me so happy to have inspired someone...*sniff* |
| Autumn Whispers 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abuse*...Is reviewing. Don't hurt me!! (cowers in fear)* Very nice. I like Zura a lot, she has a very quirky personality and is probably the only one besides Kurama to make fun of/defy Hiei. "This is my window." lol I'm wondering about the appearance of Zura, too. When you say she's a dog demon, does that mean she looks like the regular (well, demons don't REALLY look regular, but we'll just sweep over that, shall we?) animal demon, like Youko Kurama and the announcer (is forgetting her name for the time being...) in the anime? As in, she looks like a human with extremely long hair, dog ears, and a tail?... That's how I've been picturing her for awhile... I want to see how this plays out, it seems she has taken a liking to both Kurama and Hiei (like me! x3) and it says romance to it, and I've noticed that both Hiei and Kurama have noticed things too about her. Please write more soon!! Please! And thank you! |