Hmm..I liked it, but I kind of thought the fact that you made it so similar to JT's thoughts was a little distracting. I know I kept comparing to the first chapter, and I also understand that you probably did that for a reason, such as a nice little twist. Regardless, I found it a little...dumb, I guess that it was nearly exactly the same...

Wow really good...
I can't for you to finish, oh and thanx for adding my story
to the Jiberty's good(great)stroies list
hehe

Awesome begginning, looking forward to the middle and end xD Pretty much the PB&J of the story =)

I loved it. It was just what I need to fix my JIberty craving

Loved it. Thought it was great. Also I always see Liberty's insight on things. I don't see enough of JT's but it would be great to see Liberty's. Please update this and your other stories!

This was a great start, I liked that you told us about J.T.'s feelings more in-depth in this fic. Hope to se J.T.'s wish come true, and also get some insight on Liberty's feelings.