This is so sweet and heartbreaking, excellently written and I WILL beg for more, right now! Please! It'd be wonderful to see what happens.

I loved the story not many people would really think Kaname Tousen as doing somthing such as this. Many think of him as a...Loner so to speak. I loved it so much. It would be very great if you conitued this I'm actually begging for more.

Magnificent,
Slow, sensual and the description... (Ok I am going to slap myself now, LOL!) Poor Orihime, I can literally feel her desperation and her heart ache at being stuck without those she loves.

And Kaname, what is wrong with you, lol! unless the one he gave his heart to is still alive. If not, protect and get over it. 80)

Take a bow Rinda, Absolutely breathtaking writing!

Oh, I liked this. It was a really interesting couple and I liked how you ended it. Those I found it a bit depressing, I also thought it was a nice twist.

Pin Needle

I just gotta say, i like both your stories so far... this was another really good story *does the happy dance around the computer)
I love how good you pick up the characters (If that makes sense...) and even you characters fit well in the story line where as other stories not only are their characters just kinda thrown in, but the give the actual character WHOLE different personalities.
I also love how creative this was... and i could actually see it happen...
Keep up the really good work

Wow I liked this, it was a far different ending than most lemons you read here. It struck hard with me how close ( toward the end ) Tousen-sama actually reflected his anime/manga character, which is a rarety in itself among fan fics. I liked it, and the fact that it didnt use the " I love you " aspect was greatly appreciated by this reader! Nice work!

Write On ( pun intended )