I love the way you had so many different science fiction stories intertwined and intermingled together. What a fantastic conglomeration. Jack O'Neill & Daniel Jackson brought a smile to my face.

I can tell that you spent a lot of time on it. It is edited very well captures the essence of this Cantina place perfectly. *wink* My favorite is that Zif guy. He seems pretty swell. Anywho, it was written very well--and I like how it is way more light-hearted than my story. Excellent job. Keep it up! *Adds story to Favorites and Alerts*