Haha, I can just imagine if they got caught making out in the greenhouse. Great fic, really well-written.

I'm not sure how I missed this one and The Tipping Point Mystery, but I'm glad I found them!

They are both good, but this one is my favorite - more "action". :) I know it's a fine line when writing for this fandom - it can be hard to write for those two since they tend to represent our innocent childhood, but you did it very well!

I'm also interested to know if you have any plans on continuing this one... I'd love to see how it pans out!

Aw...that was absolutely WONDERFUL! I absolutely loved this romantic interlude of sorts. So beautifully written and made for a fantastic read. Nice work! :)

~Shaliza

Again, I loved it. You really set the mood with the scenario and the emotions were so intense. It was sweet how Frank got all tense when Nancy suggested being in "mortal danger". I think you've done a really great job sort of pushing the relationship between Nancy and Frank just a little further than most writers here take it. Hopefully we'll see more from you soon?

hey
that was good ,alot of passion fly about.
u should continue to what happenes 'later' since its in the M section alreay
great work
do update soon