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Dvana
2009-02-24 . chapter 2
Hmm, quite the interesting start. Thanks for sharing!
Darkesong
2008-04-29 . chapter 2
Very intersting, looking forward to reading the next chapter :D
Silveriss
2008-04-26 . chapter 2
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner on this one but I have to say that this chapter really got me thinking. I love how you incorporated the fact that Sunstreaker, Sideswipe and the rest of the crew don't really know what to make of Starrunner. The assumptions flying around really bring this chapter in with the rest of your stories. It's one of the best things I love about your work, it's all interconnected and very expertly at that. ^^ Wonderful job!
CaravanKa
2008-04-16 . chapter 2
Eh-heh, gushed some about this at your LJ... Wish to add here that I loved - as always - how you delved into their social life. (Say, that "Ark grapevine" and soldier hearsay mill is a very fun and vividly lifelike detail!)
And yes, I imagine Starrunner would indeed be uneasy or at least self-conscious around making-odd-moves toward him Sunstreaker. (And maybe Blue as well - could be guilt complex?)
AMAPADME
2008-04-14 . chapter 2
So I really liked this story. It shows how imprinted Starrunner is already on Sunstreaker. So when will they gfinally be allowed to get together. Although I love the "torture" Sunny is going through.
Dragon of Dispair
2008-04-14 . chapter 2
what a nice way to wake up. of course then i had to go to school...

the onesided sunstreaker/starrunner pairing is making me giggle so much. those were some nice dream/fantasies on sunstreaker's part. and why does it not surprise me that any fantasy on a twin's part involving a jet is going to start out with jet judo? and sunstreaker enjoys flying -- much love.

that rumor sideswipe described toward the end is very interesting. that had kind of been one thing i (very vaguely) wondered about starrunner's situation -- what do the rest of the autobots think? did they get told the full truth, or were they left to come up with explanations on their own? -- and that very neatly answers quite a bit. now i'm wondering what the twins (more sunstreaker then sideswipe, because it seems that several vital aspects of the fantasies are based off that rumor) are going to think/do when they find out everything...

i am so glad you continued this -- and a lot sooner than i would have expected too!
Reality Obscured
2008-04-14 . chapter 2
Wow. Starrunner? I've been following "The Faction Who Sparked Him" and I thoroughly enjoy each and every side story you write for it. I can't wait for future chapters!
Dragowolf
2008-04-14 . chapter 2
LOVE IT! That was good! I cann't wait to see if these two actually get together! I hope they do! But I have a feeling that Starrunner is not even aware of Sunny's feelings.

Will Sunny start spending more time with Starrunner?

Wonder what Sides and Blue will think of Star?

Hope that Sunny and Star get together! They would make a great couple!!

I wonder what Enny would think of her creation falling for a Autobot?

MORE SOON PLEASE! PLEASE!
Dragowolf
2008-03-02 . chapter 1
LOVE IT! I read this a while ago and I forgot to review! SORRY!

Anyway, I love it! Having Sunstreaker compete for someone's attention will be fun to watch!! So I am assuming that Bluestreak is more than ok with sharing Sunstreaker with someone else? But reading your other fic about the three of them I don't see why not.

Anyway LOVE THIS! I can not wait till the next chapter to find out what happens next! PLEASE MORE!
P.A.W.07
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
Very cute and I can't say I've ever read any fic quite like it. Wonderful work.
Gloria Stone
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
Yo, sorry it took so long to review. Been learning about the back roads of PA more than I ever wanted to. UGH the worst few days of my life. I want to scream.
well anyway on to the review! I love this! I think I say this everytime you update anything...but heck its true everytime.
When I realized what this was I was so excited. The thought of Sunny liking Starrunner had me squealing like a fan girl.
whenever "A question of Model Year" happens I hope that starrunner doesn't get heart broken. I was actually wondering if Swoops special friend was Starrunner. Um...I guess I still don't know that but the hints point to it.
Anyway gotta go a sleep.
Oh and ps. What's Starrunners new alt mode or does he have the same one? If you wanna send me a discription I've had the inkling to do a pic of Starrunner. If that's cool with you.
Philadelphiacheese
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
Yay this one was great. I spot love triangle. Is this going to continue in the main series? Anyways thanks for telling me about the new one-shots. Sorry that I did not have you on alert. I will go do it now.
Silveriss
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
I rather like your take on Sunstreaker. It's clear you've really thought out his character and his interactions with the other Autobots. This was a wonderful piece.
CaravanKa
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
We-e-e! You've brought 'Runner back in action and all fresh :)
"It's a new day, It's a new dawn..." Yet Sunny doesn't feel all too good? _That's_ an unexpected crush... No, two crushes... A triangle is shaping up..? Wonder what Ironhide has to say.
...OMG.
lazeee an demented
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Good chapter, bless, you gotta love the twins.
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