Beautiful. I love the fact that "it's a pretty good day, there's no blood" and the part about Krad. And how cold and unconscious is his obsession with Daisuke. Much love :3

The ending was good! Because to dream, you sleep and sleeping is like death, which is an end of sorts. Yes, yes?

Aha. And I like the title because... well I thought it was a comment on Satoshi, how his life is just about the sins of Dark and Krad but he wouldn't call it a tragedy because he is pulled toward Daisuke because of it.

...And I really liked it!

This is a very interesting intro, but please make the next one longer, and potentially with more discription? I'm interested about where you'll go from here.

Nadeshiko-chan is wa~tching!