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| nonhalema 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseReally good work! |
| rockstarla90 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abusei love love love the story, but im not really sure why she is crying in the end...will you clue me in please? |
| Ayjah 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI love these two together :) |
| da-doink-doink 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job!! I agree with Singing Violin...why was she crying, how'd they get together, and how is he going to ensure they stay together? Very well written! Great Story! :D Doink Doink |
| Singing Violin 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseLoved this, but it's too short! It's a beautiful snapshot of what their relationship might be like on board the ship (and a good explanation of why they never got around to promoting Harry) but I want to know more - how did they get together? Why is she crying? What is he planning to make sure she doesn't end it? Well written, though... |