It has promise! You should continue it and see where it goes...

this is really short..but really good.
Are you planning to continue it?

Yes I do want to review, but you may not like what I have to say.
That was far too short, if this had a been a prologue for a longer fic it would be acceptable, but it wasn't.
However, your grammer and descriptions were done well :).

You should continue this as a longer story. Awesome job!
-WT

Hello!please update he!he!he! my review is short too.