I am just reviewing at random.

Dumpling in the Steamer!*donkey brayin-Oh, wait. That was just my laughter.

HA><HA

Fangirly scream feat. NOSEBLEED.

My CABBAGES!

YOU ARE A CERTIFIED GENIUS.*A peal of raucous laughter* LOVE IT! This is most definitely a Zutara and AN AVATAR fanfic at its finest.

Cheers!

Very good, everyone was remarkably in-character. I look forward to reading your other fics...although I heard the phrase 'pearl-diving' the other day and couldn't take it seriously. So thank you for that :P

I read this story before about a year ago. I loved it then and I still love it now. I don't have the energy to look and see if I reviewed before. I will be a fool if I had not. But if I did...I will do so again. This story more than deserves it! One of my all time favorite fanfics of all time, and by the look of your review no.s I'd say its safe to say others agree with me. I love it. Thanks for the lovely experience I got while reading this. I do hope to see more from you in the future.

With utter respect,
Aru-chann

long chapters i've been reading for an hour and i'm only on chap 3 but really good i didn't understand it at first but i'm getting it now any i love the story so far but i kinda think that Xiao Zhi is a jerk in the story stormbenders but i have a few questions like, who is she? and what is her past like? and why is she such a jerk all the time?

This is probably one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. It's topped only by the first fanficiton I ever read which will forever hold a special place in my heart. I wish the story would never have ended. I was sad when it started coming to an end because it made me so happy reading it. You wrote the characters amazingly. I wish I'd become a fan of avatar sooner just so I could have read this fic sooner.

I found your story on Sunday and I finished it yesterday afternoon, forsaking all homework, chores and love for my poor animals. I pride myself as at least an amature writer but right at this moment I cannpot find a word to describe how utterly amazing this fic is. I laughed myself stupid and actually cried at the end. It was beautiful and moving and so in character, so well put, so full of emotion and love and... I utterly adore it.

I thank you from the very bottom of my heart for writing this, for indulging my Zutara-ness, for making me roll around on the floor for ten minutes straight laughing at the "It wasn't so big" scene and for making me sqeal in delight at the sibling!Tokko that just made this story the best I have read so far.

I wish with all my heart this is how the show ended and I'm pretty convinced that if it was not a children's show, the ending would have been similar to this.

Thanks also for making Zuko so much part of that family. I adored that almost as much as I loved Zuko and Katara kissing.

Now I'm going to take abreak to catch up on reality and work and then I'm going to go onto your other stories.

Thank you so so so much once again and congratulations on the amazingly wonderful job.

:O

oh...


my...

god.



That was just so... heavy. My god, you're a fanTASTIC writer.

keep up the good work i love it all ready.

"Now I have to make you an icebath!"

"That might be a good idea."

lemme just tell you I laughed out loud during that haha :)

I'm on chapter 16 of your lovely story now! I can't wait to finish it<3

Superb ending to a brilliant story! :)

I don't actually like the beginning of this story. i hated the OCs and how Katara was a little OOC. But towards the middle, I loved how you wrote about Zuko and Katara's interaction. It was really really real. Plus, I really enjoyed reading your story! :D. finished it in two sittings. And your afterword made sense with 'For me, Aang is not the hero of ATLA. Zuko is. Zuko is the one who has change and growth and development. Conversely, all of Aang’s views get validated and he doesn’t have to change his ways at all – he gets his druthers and never has to make a decision that might sacrifice his personality or identity. He remains insulated from the world and its problems, and rewarded for his weakness. Does he defeat the Fire Lord? Yes. But does he conquer any of his inner demons? No. And it’s sad, because while the others have grown up, he has not. He is Peter Pan, and the Lion-Turtle’s back is his Neverland.' I really loved your story!:D

Nice...it makes me wanna read more! I especially love the part when Sokka says "Why, Universe? Why? What did we ever do to you?"

Great job in giving Sokka a line that is so IC.

This chapter is so touching!