 Randomreader 001 2009-12-02 . chapter 5GREAT! just finished reading the whole story, and listened to the "Seven rings in hand" song during the big battle. It was worth it. I enjoyed the story a whole lot. 10/10 |
 dr-fan/mai-lover 2009-07-12 . chapter 5 bervo wow-naertuo,s-beloveit-hatna-a-geine hple-me-do,t-know-anyingabout sercret-rings
man-do-i-feel-satupit |
 RasenganFin 2009-07-04 . chapter 5You could have mentioned that Super Sonic is Sonic's final smash, alot more people know it from that. |
 Moriko no Hikari 2009-06-29 . chapter 5Whe. Pein is gonna be a hurtin' unit! |
 Yakurenazea 2009-06-29 . chapter 5Lol, loved the ending. Not bad, but at the beginning of the chapter it seemed a little rushed, but it made up for it with a kick ass ending and middle. HOORAY FOR NARUTO! |
 moak strongheart 2009-06-29 . chapter 5 That was awesome and I loved the ending where Pein came in and was looking for the Kyuubi but he didn't know that Naruto is the new one and I'm curious of his golden Kyuubi form, is it like the Super Saiyan form?
Oh well.
Moak Strongheart |
 Gravity The Wizard 2009-06-28 . chapter 5I loved it! |
 dark knight 52 2009-06-28 . chapter 5hey neokenshin this story is 10% great as well as the bijuu wars anyway u should make a naruto and the black knight story with a little twist im rooting for your success on all your stories. oh yeah when is the next chapter of the bijuu wars. |
 Dragon Man 180 2009-06-28 . chapter 5I think if you did a version of Naruto and the Black Knight Excalibur would become a katana for Naruto. But I also have a suggestion: Make a female Haku the Lady of the Lake and have her come back to Naruto's world. Hinata could also be sucked into the world and become a princess Naruto has to rescue before she can help him. And since it's a medieval based world... how about Kyuubi stuck as a horse sized fox due to dark magic and Naruto has to beat the big bad to free her? I can totally see Naruto and Hinata riding on Kyuubi's back like the prince carrying off his bride.
Nice ending, a good break from the darker aspects of Bijuu wars. I needed that after a day of dealing with a heatwave at home. I like the final three wishes, very clever. But I would have loved to see how the beating of Pein ended, just because I can see Naruto handling him on his own, so with the help of Hinata and Kyu... he'd be hamburger meat. |
 FallenFox15 2009-06-28 . chapter 5awesome hope for a sequel |
 stranger109 2009-06-22 . chapter 4This story is awsome you must update soon please do not stop |
 Gravity The Wizard 2009-06-11 . chapter 1Please Continue! |
 Moriko no Hikari 2008-11-24 . chapter 4DON'T LEAVE US ALL HANGING! NO FAIR! |
 Ryuus2 2008-11-15 . chapter 3Sorry, I screwed up my last review. Most genie are sealed in bottles or lamps but Hinata is sealed in a ring, which is the ring I mentioned for her. |
 Ryuus2 2008-11-15 . chapter 4Your math is a little wrong. Naruto has Hinata's ring, the world ring from the scopion, the world ring from the jungle cave, the world ring from freeing Sinbad, and the world ring from beating that last monster this chapter. So in total he has five rings, four of the world rings, and only needs three more for the full set.
Also, I haven't played Sonic and the Secret Rings so I don't know if this is possible; but, can Naruto use the rings to do stuff? Like how Sinbad's ring is supposed to make storms, could another ring give him another elemental power? Just wondering.
Love your work by he way, can't wait to read more. |