I love the first chapter i really hope u update soon.

I do hope you continue this! This is a really nice start and I would love to read more!

You going to update this? Been a month since your little note.

*waits for update*

It's good to see another EE story out there. Gary is in character and the way you started with the first paragraph really pulled me in. Nice job, I hope to see more of this.

Oh, please update! Please?

Yay! I was so excited to find a new story here! I hope that more authors come as well!

I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. It was a great and strong beginning and you have me intrigued already. I like the story line too.

One thing I noticed though, is that the first scene with dialogue between Gary and Sara, the dialogue all runs together in one paragraph. It makes it a bit hard to read, so if you could separate each person's lines, it'd make it easier. But besides that, everything looked great!

Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!

Oh, I'm so glad to see another good Early Edition story. Your first chapter has really brought me into the story and I hope you won't take too long to provide more.

You have captured the feel of the TV series. Gary really is a guardian angel.

I can't tell you how excited I was to find another EE fic here. This is a strong beginning and I can't wait to find out what happens to Sara. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.