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| take5 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseI'm in love! This was beautiful! Do you plan on writing more? I hope so because your writing is just way too perfect!! This made me smile! And although there were *many* lines that made me laugh, none did so more than when Bill said he hopped a plane to France and woke up in Australia. HAHAHA! |
| Kayryn 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love this little post love making scene. If there's one thing I could ask for, is to have the story beta read. There were a few spelling mistakes and those are easily taken care of by letting someone check the story before posting it. But really, this was lovely. |
| twentyfour.mad 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great story to start a morning off!! ;) Chips, the dog ;) Very cute story! Hey I know Palmer4President mentioned this in her review, but if you're interested in talking to some B/K fans just come over to the Bill&Karen forum, here on FF!! ;) Please keep writing- Bill and Karen, you write them so beautifully! ;) twentyfour.mad ~ Mak |
| Palmer4President 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseYay! Another story! I loved this! It was so cute, and I loved being able to learn more about Bill's past. What an incredibly cute story Bill had about Chips. I loved is. I laughed at the end, too, where Karen argued about her snoring. Very, very Karen-like. :D Fantastic story, and I hope you continue to write Bill and Karen! Also, if you're interested, there's a Bill and Karen forum here under the "Forums" tab, if you wanted a chance to talk to other BK shippers. Only if you're interested, but we'd love to have you drop by. |
| Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseCool! I love it too! What a sad dog story though. Chips? Thats an awesome name!! Keep up the great writing. ^_^ |
| kaidiii 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseLovely story... |