 gulmo 2008-02-22 . chapter 1i'm really glad you're writing this and hope u'll make it as long as the other one :-]
what i love about the beginning is how you've homed in on the one thing that's bothered me about the storyline in the show : that craig is left completely alone. jp returns to a loving family, to a place he is familiar with whereas craig, who has never been v.good at being on his own and who is immature and confused, will find himself in an unfamiliar space with no one to look to for support. (look how he reacted when jp didn't open the door. all that sobbing...)
i love your writing and craig's pov, in this chapter, works really well.
thanks for writing it :-] |