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CharlieTheUnicorn13
2008-03-12 . chapter 1
You--you've lost it! First you kill a teenager, then you kill a child, and now you're killing old guys? You evil person. :p

Well, that was a good fic. That was REALLY unexpected.
Two Limes in a Coconut
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
You... killed... Vector... (sob)

Great fic though.
puppyface009
2008-02-29 . chapter 1
IF YOU'RE GOING TO KILL THE VECTOR MAKE IT A MURDER MYSTERY!

That was a pretty good fic. I was definately NOT expecting the ending.

P.S. When will your need for killing people through fan fictions end?...yeah...this review sucked...
FPWAaBTGWIS
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
Aw, you made Cortes cry! And had it in character, too! Yay!

I figured that would happen to poor Vector, though. You had me thinking there for a minute that he'd be okay, just bruised, but then... that thought kinda went down the drain. XP

Anyways, the sentance that made my day after that was:

"It’s going to run into a pirate ship.”

XD Yeah! Vengeance! You rock, Cortes!

Hee, good fic! Nice refreshment of angst for the category. ^_^

Hawkfrost2
Someonerandome
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
YOU KILLED THE VECTOR?!!??!!

Good fic though.
The Lightning Flash
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
I'm away for one night, and YOU go and kill the Vector!! I said write me some kick-arse fic, not kick-Vector's-arse fic! :P

Still. I loved it. XD I want to write a part two. Beautifully sad.
SSpeedy
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Wow, I somehow saw that coming. XD I loved it. I laughed when Cortes said something that "he would not have said if anyone younger had been around." ::shot::

Poor Vector. Oh well, he's old. He was bound to die anyway.
Cortes: YOU'RE EVIL!
THANK YOU!
metamorphstorm
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
I love this, however sad. Glad to see, though, that you're still writing after that awesome ten-chapter "Waters Deep."
This was great. I love it. (I said that already, didn't I?)
And I liked how you made that little reference:
The Guardian says something about how deserted the streets are, asks if people are hiding or "wiped out by a plague-" funny little Waters Deep reference, ironically. =D

Keep Writing! =D
Phoenix Le Grand
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Yay, more fic. ^^

This was really good, I suck at reviews so I don't really know what to say. xDD D'aww, you killed Vector. So, how many characters have you killed now? :P

“That Guardian better pray he isn’t aboard.” For some reason, that line made me squee. >< xD

WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO WRITE?!! xDD
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