 CharlieTheUnicorn13 2008-03-12 . chapter 1You--you've lost it! First you kill a teenager, then you kill a child, and now you're killing old guys? You evil person. :p
Well, that was a good fic. That was REALLY unexpected. |
 Two Limes in a Coconut 2008-03-09 . chapter 1You... killed... Vector... (sob)
Great fic though. |
 puppyface009 2008-02-29 . chapter 1IF YOU'RE GOING TO KILL THE VECTOR MAKE IT A MURDER MYSTERY!
That was a pretty good fic. I was definately NOT expecting the ending.
P.S. When will your need for killing people through fan fictions end?...yeah...this review sucked... |
 FPWAaBTGWIS 2008-02-24 . chapter 1Aw, you made Cortes cry! And had it in character, too! Yay!
I figured that would happen to poor Vector, though. You had me thinking there for a minute that he'd be okay, just bruised, but then... that thought kinda went down the drain. XP
Anyways, the sentance that made my day after that was:
"It’s going to run into a pirate ship.”
XD Yeah! Vengeance! You rock, Cortes!
Hee, good fic! Nice refreshment of angst for the category. ^_^
Hawkfrost2 |
 Someonerandome 2008-02-23 . chapter 1YOU KILLED THE VECTOR?!!??!!
Good fic though. |
 The Lightning Flash 2008-02-22 . chapter 1I'm away for one night, and YOU go and kill the Vector!! I said write me some kick-arse fic, not kick-Vector's-arse fic! :P
Still. I loved it. XD I want to write a part two. Beautifully sad. |
 SSpeedy 2008-02-22 . chapter 1Wow, I somehow saw that coming. XD I loved it. I laughed when Cortes said something that "he would not have said if anyone younger had been around." ::shot::
Poor Vector. Oh well, he's old. He was bound to die anyway.
Cortes: YOU'RE EVIL!
THANK YOU! |
 metamorphstorm 2008-02-22 . chapter 1I love this, however sad. Glad to see, though, that you're still writing after that awesome ten-chapter "Waters Deep."
This was great. I love it. (I said that already, didn't I?)
And I liked how you made that little reference:
The Guardian says something about how deserted the streets are, asks if people are hiding or "wiped out by a plague-" funny little Waters Deep reference, ironically. =D
Keep Writing! =D |
 Phoenix Le Grand 2008-02-22 . chapter 1Yay, more fic. ^^
This was really good, I suck at reviews so I don't really know what to say. xDD D'aww, you killed Vector. So, how many characters have you killed now? :P
“That Guardian better pray he isn’t aboard.” For some reason, that line made me squee. >< xD
WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO WRITE?!! xDD |