Oh, i love these. <3 <3
You get as much respect as Takeuchi-dono herself!

(Puts away T-virus) No zombies.

(Muffled cried of 'modeo aspodeel')
BAD PARASITES

~General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows and Servant To That Which Waits, Senshi of the Many Moons and Sailor Elara, out.

I see you helped move some plot point move along from Ranma 1/2 background here, it's fairly neatly done overall.

It's been awhile since you posted anything though, so I'm kind of wondering if the comic is taking a lot of your time and stopping you from writing any more, or if you've lately not had much of a muse for any further parts?

I really do love this story, despite how short it is overall. The ending is classic.

The bad news:

1. I really did not like the way you did the flashbacks. I kept getting lost for a few minutes and checking the previous sentences to make sure I did not accidently jump way down or through multiple chapters.

2. You got part of the time line wrong. At the end of Fire's story, Ranma said he and Akane would be married in a month and Nodoka was invited. At that time she could decide if her feelings expressed when he revealed he was Sailor Sun were still her feelings. In your story Akane tells Genma, Soun, and Kasumi that Ranma proposed last week and asked how soon could they get married. That would be like as fast as Genma and Soun could get the paperwork signed and a priest to perform the ceremony, figure the next day if not a holy day.

3. I do not remember Akane having ki attacks except the breaking point attack in Fire's story. The most obvious place this was shown not present was when Akane was breaking the stasis chambers. If she had the Chestnut Fist when breaking the statis chambers, I am sure more than 48 could have been done in several minutes.

The good news:

1. Few technical errors and except for bad point 1 easy to read.

2. You filled in areas I had always hoped Fire might go back and add storyline too. He had his story to tell and I enjoyed it enough to re-read it several times but he did leave a few areas untouched.

3. You added bits of humor. I especially like the little problem with bleeding to death.

Overall I liked it.

Ok, good story so far.

Haha, a wonderful addition to the Sailor Ranko series.

i love this fic its verry good ure a verry good authore i read the web comic every day when it has a new chapter i wish i could be as good of a authore as you

any ways i realy enjoyed this i hope u start updating the main 1 soon any ways keep up the good work

great chapter and that last sceen was verry sweet and well done off to read the last chap

good chapter im lovin this wish i had nto waited so long to read it sry im a bad sailor ranko fan *bonks self*

good so far big fan of sailor ranko havent goten aroudn to reading this till just now i love it so far but it was akane who went with ranma to help lern the dragon heavan atack ( cant spell its reg name for nothin) not ukyo

Nice update as always! Keep up the great work Becky! I hope to see a new chapter soon, but take your time!

Sincerely,
AshK

Don't give you chicken pox? I don't know if I can do that? I had shingles (adult chicken pox, usually a desease of the elderly) before I was 25.

I am eagerly waiting each installment of this. How are you rewriting the end of a series that you had already written three-and-a-half sequels for?

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::foflmao:: This. Is. GREAT! And the ending was, in a word, priceless! ::snickers:: I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Now that was cute. I think Kasumi should feed him the Red beans and rice

Very enjoyable, as usual.