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| Mosvie 2k8 2008-08-29 ch 7, | abuseHey great chapter, i was on vacation too so i couldn't review, have now though , so Olivia is dead, hm whos next lol. Update soon. |
| nope 2008-08-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseI'm pretty sure that "cataleptic" doesn't apply here, since it is usually used to describe physical manifestations of certain types of schizophrenia. If you have ever seen a cataleptic person, you would also see that these symptoms are nothing like those of a person who has just been beaten senseless. |
| Mosvie 2k8 2008-07-07 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter. update soon, am hooked. |
| sovereignty'd 2008-06-19 ch 6, | abuseLove your story so far! Aw, I was hoping Valerie would win because that's actually my real name so :P Can't wait until the next update! |
| Cross-eyed-Kelly 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer. Well here i go. hehe..yup i read it, hopefully i am the FIRST because i like check everyday if its up, not like a stalker. Well in my NON-BIASED opinion i reckon dan and whats her name, oh yes joyce should be set free. Like you know a little twist at the end. I also deeply believe that ashley and the other dim- wit should die. Just some helpful advise which you probably wont even take into consideration but please i beg you, please- do it for me, after all i am cross-eyed. ohyeah Greaat story... =] |
| SlasherFanatic26 2008-05-05 ch 6, | abuseYay! U updated! Thats chapter was off the hook, lol, and i loved reading it! I liked Taylor and Ashley's part because they were trying hard to stay apart from each other hahaha :D Update when u can! |
| LoserLove 2008-04-18 ch 5, | abuseDamn Val! You're one evil author! And I'm loving it, despite the fact that you made me look feeble. Aww Dean (let's all say aww!). Anyhoo, the dream I know you won't let that happen coz I will wring your neck! Haha! Just Kidding, or not! Good Work Padalecki! |
| Neri 2008-04-17 ch 5, anon. | abusewoa.. isn't it a bit much? i mean the 5m thing.. anyway great fic, really promising. update soon! (even thought it was only 4 days ago =P |
| Galantria 2008-04-15 ch 5, | abuseWow, I love this story! Haha, Mrs. Johnson is "inspired" by a real life teacher?? Dean is now officially my favorite, and I was so scared he was going to die in the classroom! I just no Anneliese is going to kill him because of the dream :(. Anyway, great chapter! |
| SlasherFanatic26 2008-04-14 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great beginning. I like the little twist that they can barely come in contact with each other without their collars blowing up haha. Mrs. Johnson is so evil haha. I feel bad for Madison, although i like that name haha. I think that either Dean or Valerie is going to win. I can't wait to see the rest of the players, including the bad ones. From the looks of it, this is going to be a fun novel! UPDATE SOON! :D ~SF26 |
| JOYCiiE-X 2008-03-29 ch 3, | abuseBloody hell valerie. What a whopper of a story- i love it man.I mean Danny and Joyce = Thee Couple =] Omgosh update now! what happens next?? huh? I dont know about everyone else but id like to know how Dan and Joyce are getting along. Maybe you should just write a whole story about them. You know__its just an idea =] Love it! Love it! Love it! Phew. x in a while crocodile =] |
| MATTWEEKS 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI think that is the headmistress who is the teacher who kod Dean that was sheer nasty lol well come on Zach you can do it! |
| Galantria 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseAw that sucks (about the ipod not the story haha) my dad was trying to add a song to mine last summer and he deleted EVERYTHING by setting up a new account!! Anyways... about the story. IT WAS SO AWESOME! Dean is now my favorite character! I looved the fight scene. So is Sophie going to be in the game?? And who was the woman who knocked out Dean?? Update soon! |
| SlasherFanatic26 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseGreat great great so far. I was scared that u quit on this fic lol Glad u didn't! :D Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens to Dean and Sophie (Sophie's evil lol) YAY! idk lol ~SF26 |
| LoserLove 2008-03-14 ch 2, | abuseHey! I'm commetning on this chapter coz I already commented on the other one. Damn you for saying that you updated it, bumface! Anyway, how was the guy with all the cake? |