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Mosvie 2k8
2008-08-29
ch 7,
abuseHey great chapter, i was on vacation too so i couldn't review, have now though , so Olivia is dead, hm whos next lol.

Update soon.
nope
2008-08-22
ch 4, anon.
abuseI'm pretty sure that "cataleptic" doesn't apply here, since it is usually used to describe physical manifestations of certain types of schizophrenia. If you have ever seen a cataleptic person, you would also see that these symptoms are nothing like those of a person who has just been beaten senseless.
Mosvie 2k8
2008-07-07
ch 6,
abuseGreat chapter.

update soon, am hooked.
sovereignty'd
2008-06-19
ch 6,
abuseLove your story so far! Aw, I was hoping Valerie would win because that's actually my real name so :P

Can't wait until the next update!
Cross-eyed-Kelly
2008-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer. Well here i go.

hehe..yup i read it, hopefully i am the FIRST because i like check everyday if its up, not like a stalker. Well in my NON-BIASED opinion i reckon dan and whats her name, oh yes joyce should be set free. Like you know a little twist at the end. I also deeply believe that ashley and the other dim- wit should die. Just some helpful advise which you probably wont even take into consideration but please i beg you, please- do it for me, after all i am cross-eyed.

ohyeah Greaat story... =]
SlasherFanatic26
2008-05-05
ch 6,
abuseYay! U updated! Thats chapter was off the hook, lol, and i loved reading it! I liked Taylor and Ashley's part because they were trying hard to stay apart from each other hahaha :D

Update when u can!
LoserLove
2008-04-18
ch 5,
abuseDamn Val! You're one evil author! And I'm loving it, despite the fact that you made me look feeble. Aww Dean (let's all say aww!). Anyhoo, the dream I know you won't let that happen coz I will wring your neck! Haha! Just Kidding, or not! Good Work Padalecki!
Neri
2008-04-17
ch 5, anon.
abusewoa.. isn't it a bit much? i mean the 5m thing..
anyway great fic, really promising.
update soon! (even thought it was only 4 days ago =P
Galantria
2008-04-15
ch 5,
abuseWow, I love this story! Haha, Mrs. Johnson is "inspired" by a real life teacher?? Dean is now officially my favorite, and I was so scared he was going to die in the classroom! I just no Anneliese is going to kill him because of the dream :(. Anyway, great chapter!
SlasherFanatic26
2008-04-14
ch 5,
abuseThis is a great beginning. I like the little twist that they can barely come in contact with each other without their collars blowing up haha. Mrs. Johnson is so evil haha. I feel bad for Madison, although i like that name haha. I think that either Dean or Valerie is going to win. I can't wait to see the rest of the players, including the bad ones.

From the looks of it, this is going to be a fun novel! UPDATE SOON! :D

~SF26
JOYCiiE-X
2008-03-29
ch 3,
abuseBloody hell valerie. What a whopper of a story- i love it man.I mean Danny and Joyce = Thee Couple =] Omgosh update now! what happens next?? huh? I dont know about everyone else but id like to know how Dan and Joyce are getting along. Maybe you should just write a whole story about them. You know__its just an idea =]
Love it!
Love it!
Love it!

Phew.


x in a while crocodile =]
MATTWEEKS
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseI think that is the headmistress who is the teacher who kod Dean that was sheer nasty lol well come on Zach you can do it!
Galantria
2008-03-22
ch 4,
abuseAw that sucks (about the ipod not the story haha) my dad was trying to add a song to mine last summer and he deleted EVERYTHING by setting up a new account!! Anyways... about the story.
IT WAS SO AWESOME! Dean is now my favorite character! I looved the fight scene. So is Sophie going to be in the game?? And who was the woman who knocked out Dean?? Update soon!
SlasherFanatic26
2008-03-22
ch 4,
abuseGreat great great so far.
I was scared that u quit on this fic lol
Glad u didn't! :D
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens to Dean and Sophie (Sophie's evil lol)
YAY!
idk lol
~SF26
LoserLove
2008-03-14
ch 2,
abuseHey! I'm commetning on this chapter coz I already commented on the other one. Damn you for saying that you updated it, bumface! Anyway, how was the guy with all the cake?
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