A great poem fic. Very well written.

Beautiful! Simply tragic and sorrowful, as the entire Trojan War was!

A very interesting, though sad point of view.

Very well done, PoC! I was always a big fan of The Odyssey and The Iliad back during my high school days and this brought back some good memories. Good way to tell another story, good rhythm of words, and a fresh new perspective.

That was so sad. You can really see it from her point of view, and you just feel so awful, so sad for her. It's some really excellent poetry. Sorrowful, but good.

Interesting. This may seem like a strange question, but did you see the Ancient Greek version, or just the English? I study Greek, and we begin poetry after Easter. :)

wow. thats good. and sad. i like the structure you have. its really cool.