This was an EXCELLENT story! You captured all the characters beautifully.

Uh huh, yup. Loved it. Classic Spencer screw-up.
This was great!

Those last few lines were classic Shawn Spencer. The insides of my hands hurt, I'm havin' sympathy pains.

yay! a mostly happy ending! loved it as always.

~cd

I totally loved it! The whole story was great!

Um, pretty much LOVED it! Seriously, the dialogue is great. Awesome job.

NO! wow this is a really good story! Update soon!

Don't let crazy Josie hurt Shawn!!

Though I have to admit, the wire is very original...nice.

Uh oh.

oh i could hate you for this cliffie. come on! update!! granted, you do generally update quickly. i'll attempt to be patient.

~cd

It's never easy, open and shut, is it?

"You guys didn't know about her?"
Haha, classic line.
All right, I'm curious and can't wait for more!

Loved all the Star Wars references. Another awesome update, can't wait for more!

I like this story so far. Lassiter and shawn's talks crack me up, and your discription of the body made me sick alittle..lol

Great job!

OMG!! I feel like I'm actually watching the show! Can't wait for MORE!!

-SuperMonkFreak

“Have you ever seen a wire cheese slicer?”
Shawn started to nod and then shook his head. “No. I can proudly say I’ve never even heard of one."
That was so very Shawn-like! *laughs*